Jeff/Annie: Traces

Jun 07, 2011 21:19



Part One )

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applepips16 June 10 2011, 19:04:27 UTC
I loved the set-up and Abed's mini-rant about hyperbole. I am guilty of that myself. *g*

Also, I love where you ended it. Such a dramatic, cliffhanger-y sort of moment. Off to read the next part. :)

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sowritesauds June 10 2011, 23:47:43 UTC
I'm literally amazingly horrible at hyperbole. LOL

I'm kind of a fan of the cliffhanger. It's fun to end things in a weird spot, when you know what the resolution is going to be, and let people wonder what's going to happen. But I think I'm doing a worse job than I thought at planting little foreshadowing seeds... because people are already guessing what's next. That's OK though!

I'm really glad you liked it and thank you for reviewing!

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