Traces: Part Five

[sowritesauds]

Title: Traces (5/?)
Author: sowritesauds 
Fandom: Community
Pairing/Characters: Group, Jeff/Annie
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 4600
Summary: The group helps Jeff recover from an accident.
Author's Note: Apparently taking a break from writing this next part is just what I needed. Inspiration struck me at work, so I stole a few minutes and finished up Part Five. I'm

Comments

[fangirl_101]

Another great chapter! Can't wait for the next part. :D

I love Britta griping about Victoria's Secret yet owns their bras. I love that Jeff kept track of exactly how much greasy fast food he ate. I love the 'trying on wacky clothes' montage. I love that Abed carries a video camera with him at all times. Basically... I love it all!

[sowritesauds]

Oh, thank you so much! I really had fun writing all those little things. The subject matter of Jeff being hit by a car and it being on purpose, but meant for Annie, is kind of dark for a show like Community. So I was trying to keep things light with the montage and the fried food :) Thanks for reading, I'm glad you're liking it!

[stephanierb]

Yay for inspiration!

I love how they go to the mall, of all places. And the dressing up in crazy outfits is vintage Abed. I felt really bad for Jeff, it's got to be awful being an invalid, and feeling isolated from the group as a result.

I really enjoyed learning about the Annie and Abed's relationship. It's nice that they developed such a close bond. And of course, I love that Jeff acknowledges his jealousy over it. Annie's discontent at hearing Jeff call those shoes hot did not escape my notice, either.

Great work! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

[sowritesauds]

Oooh I'm so glad you liked it! I think a little jealousy is good for both of them. They like each other, but until there's someone else that threatens to take away the possibility of something, they're lazy about it. Jealousy propels them toward each other. Well, usually. We all remember that bathroom conversation!

Anyway, thanks for reviewing. :)

[stephanierb]

I felt the urge to read this again. I hope we see the next chapter soon!

[katiekaylove]

finally caught up! and i am so intrigued to find out more about what happened the day of the accident, like, the stuff jeff doesn't remember. and he's jealous about annie and abed! maybe it's time for him to open his mouth and admit it to her...
haha. love this though! x