I would appreciate feedback on this. Please, oh please, read it and then just comment, even if it's to say you liked/hated it. Of course, in depth reviews are desired too. ( READ.ME. )
(i know all about struggling to rationalise unfamiliar blackness; please don't think i'm being facetious, but it's always terribly hard when i've misplaced my glasses during the night.)
*snicker* well, however you feel it, that's good I spose. (and, having misplaced my glasses earlier, I see what you mean.) Did you like it, or ought I to be content with having people feel it, which seems to be the general response? probably feeling it is better, I have no idea.
i like it, i think. well, i do, it's just that some of the images make me feel kind of claustrophobic. everyone's said 'beautiful', but i can't personally reconcile that with the subject matter. regardless, the expression is powerful, and obviously affecting, so yes, i do like it. quite a lot.
ps i'm not trying to critique you here, i wouldn't know how. i'm just sayin'.
and it's currently.. hrm, 11.32pm over here. holy hell, i totally just lost 3 hours of my life somewhere.
*pleased* and thank you for your comments, they're the best I've gotten in terms of explaining and reaction etc. Critique away if you like, I'm no good at it, which is why I need people to read and review. Saying 'Beautiful!' is not helpful. Although it is ego-boosting and as I lack confidence I guess really it is helpful in a way.
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That was really beautiful. I love the way you can describe things, you can really see it. It's lovely.
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i'm just sayin'.
(i know all about struggling to rationalise unfamiliar blackness; please don't think i'm being facetious, but it's always terribly hard when i've misplaced my glasses during the night.)
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Did you like it, or ought I to be content with having people feel it, which seems to be the general response?
probably feeling it is better, I have no idea.
oh, ps, what time is it in australia now?
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well, i do, it's just that some of the images make me feel kind of claustrophobic. everyone's said 'beautiful', but i can't personally reconcile that with the subject matter. regardless, the expression is powerful, and obviously affecting, so yes, i do like it. quite a lot.
ps i'm not trying to critique you here, i wouldn't know how. i'm just sayin'.
and it's currently.. hrm, 11.32pm over here. holy hell, i totally just lost 3 hours of my life somewhere.
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*pleased* and thank you for your comments, they're the best I've gotten in terms of explaining and reaction etc. Critique away if you like, I'm no good at it, which is why I need people to read and review. Saying 'Beautiful!' is not helpful. Although it is ego-boosting and as I lack confidence I guess really it is helpful in a way.
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