Best Place. [1/1]

Apr 02, 2010 16:30

Pairing: OnTae. LIKE A CHAMP.
Warning: SMUT. SEX. FAIL. Because it's my first time. LOL, THAT TOO. but joking aside.
It's my first time writing smut. .__.
Rating: NC-17

Comments make my face haaaaappy.~

Don't have sex, or you will get pregnant. And die. )

pairing: onew/taemin, rating: nc-17, !fanfic, author: s

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reskruuz April 3 2010, 02:10:10 UTC
ughhh v. cute ♥ fluffy sex and all lsjd goodness gracious. the world is lacking so much in ontae, it's quite sad. sigh.

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spacecadetluci April 3 2010, 15:23:07 UTC
slfjd;kafjd;kljf I'm glad I could add to the ontae world, honey!

And I'm glad you liked it.~ ♥

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ichigochancake April 3 2010, 02:58:32 UTC
;-; i didn't get a spot. AND THIS DAMN SEXINESS WAS FOR ME. DON'T I DESERVE A SPOT? nah, i don't, lol.

AS I SAID BEFORE, the ending made everything perfect because scorching hot ontae and then sweet fluff makes my life complete. ngl. i wish i could produce sexy stuff like this. i disagree with your statement about my kinky!taemin in nothing but a shirt being epic. WE SHOULD'VE WROTE THAT AS A COLLAB. D:
too bad. it's gone now. /sniffs

WHY DO I ALWAYS RANT ON YOUR ONE SHOTS. LIKE ONE SENTENCE OF THE ENTIRE COMMENT HAS SOMETHING TO DO WITH THE ONE SHOT BUT EVERYTHING ELSE IS JUST JIBBERISH BRAIN FART-NESS BECAUSE YOU MAKE MY FACE HAPPY.

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spacecadetluci April 3 2010, 03:17:49 UTC
WE SHOULD STILL WRITE ONE AS A COLLAB. because fuck that would be hot.

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLOLOLOLOLOL I LIKE YOUR RANTING. IT MAKES ME HAPPY, BABY. ♥

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ichigochancake April 3 2010, 03:40:11 UTC
why do i get such a short reply. :

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spacecadetluci April 3 2010, 03:46:08 UTC
I'M SORRY. WHAT I MEANT TO SAY WAS...

UHM.

YOU'RE A SCORCHING HOT ONTAE, AND YOUR SWEET FLUFF MAKES MY LIFE COMPLETE.

YOUR VOICE CAN PRODUCE SEXY STUFF LIKE THIS. AND AND AND YOU'RE KINKY TAEMIN WITH NOTHING BUT A SHIRT ON IS EPIC.

AND YEAH.
I WISH I WAS AS ATTRACTIVE AS YOU. BUT NO. YOU THIS JESSICA IS ATTRACTIVE. I'M SORRY I CAN'T BE JESSICA. ;-;

BUT YOU'RE UHNF. WITH A SIDE OF HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLL YEAH.

...LOL WHAT. idonteven.

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ex_argh April 3 2010, 04:10:55 UTC
ugh that was pretty damn hot. I dont know but I loved the words you used and the way you wrote it. But ah I did notice that you had "gasped" in one place when it was meant to be "gasp" XD here:
becoming seemingly harder (if possible) at the beautiful gasped that escaped the auburn haired boy.

^^;; anyways thank you for writing awesome/insanely hot OnTae smut *____*;;; ♥ :DDD

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spacecadetluci April 3 2010, 04:12:38 UTC
lkaj;klaf YOU'RE RIGHT. -gasp- LOL NO PUN INTENDED.

buta klajf;kljfls I'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT HONEY. :3

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ex_argh April 3 2010, 04:52:06 UTC
XDDDDDDDDDDDDD LOL yeah :P sorry that just stuck out at me :P ♥

I DID~ djkhfsjdfsd OnTae is so cute~ and so hot~ 8D thanks for melting my brain :D ♥
(and now making me think about OnTae porn~ dljhfskdhfkdsjfhjdsfd) ♥ :D

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spacecadetluci April 3 2010, 15:26:33 UTC
lkdfja;lkdfjglk SO MANY HEARTS. I FEEL LOVED! :'D

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

LOOOOOLOLOLOL IT'S OKAY. EVERYONE THINKS ABOUT ONTAE PORN AT SOME POINT OR ANOTHER. AND IN HTE MOST INAPPROPRIATE PLACES TOO. ;D

oh yeah. ♥

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paranoiascreams April 3 2010, 05:20:16 UTC
WIFEY!!!

that was hoooooot. and im so proud of you... for your first smut to be daaaaaamn *fans self* hot.

i never could write smut for the life of me. T_T

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spacecadetluci April 3 2010, 15:29:37 UTC
HONEY BUNCHES!

LOL thank you!~

I thought I could never write smut either. AND I DID. LOL, YOU CAN DO IT. IF YOU DO I'LL BE ALL LIKE, "OMO SMUT FROM MAH CAMILLE!~" AND NINJA MY WAY TO IT AND COMMENT AND BE LIKE, "SHEEEEEEW GURL. YOU BE WRITTEN SOMETHIN' HOT. ;D"

...I hope you understood all of that keysmash. LOL. ♥

I'm glad you liked it though.~ :3

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ichigochancake July 22 2010, 07:54:39 UTC
i'm back. :<

WITH AN ANGRY FACE BECAUSE I CAN'T PRODUCE SMUT. /jealous

HMPH. YOUR ICON MATCHES MINES CUZ IT'S BLACK AND WHITE. get out. HMPHHHHH.

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spacecadetluci July 22 2010, 20:31:12 UTC
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLOLOLOLOL

itwasonetime,omg. lakfjalskfj
-flails-

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