for love;

Apr 15, 2010 21:35

Title: for love;
Pairing: ontae
Genre: ... uhm. Rom...ance? Yeah. Sure.
Warnings: creepy!jinki. LOL character death, twisted minds, cursing. blah blah.
rated: pg-13

Let's be as savvy as the birds and bees are. )

pairing: onew/taemin, rating: pg-13, !fanfic, author: s

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spacecadetluci April 16 2010, 19:57:14 UTC
Spot for Naomi. ♥

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ichigochancake April 17 2010, 05:08:37 UTC
your font makes me tear. it hurts. ;-;

BUT YEAH THIS WAS LIKE INDESCRIBABLE. i re-read it, and still teared (even more than i already was due to your font) up at the break up part. taemin, don't goooooooooooooo. // wrists

this was epik. with a k. aksdkasdkljaslkd

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ichigochancake April 17 2010, 05:09:24 UTC
omg, look. it's minho! not taemin or jinki! :O WHAT A SURPRISE. nah, not really.

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spacecadetluci April 16 2010, 19:56:57 UTC
LOL I'm glad you liked it! :D When I was writing Taemin's death scene, I was creeped out too. ;-;

Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it! ♥

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mayzeeacala April 16 2010, 08:54:02 UTC
idk if dubu was really messed up here or just plainly insane.
creeper dubu and sweet taeminie =pure love.
*million hugs and Iou's

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spacecadetluci April 16 2010, 19:59:31 UTC
dslafkjs j haha, thank you, I'm glad you liked it! :D

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elfrulezforever April 16 2010, 10:34:26 UTC
so creepy...why must you make minnie die???*sobs*

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spacecadetluci April 16 2010, 20:00:03 UTC
-nods solemnly- I know. But it was for the good of the one shot.

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salted_taiyaki April 16 2010, 13:09:12 UTC
ugh it's too early in the morning for me to read this kinda stuff (gotta brace myself and read it for tonight! haha) also the font is like my least favorite font ngl, my eyes are already tearing. of course i've only been awake for like 20 minutes so that might play a part

anyway wow this is the longest post i've written just for a friggin spot
...anyway
ontae ♥

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salted_taiyaki April 16 2010, 14:29:12 UTC
fuck okay i read it anyway, i couldn't resist L O L

Why did Jonghyun and Kibum always have to send him the fucking legitimately insane, murderers'? i almost laughed at that line

oh my god, insane jinki -- that was. oddly... i don't know, it was so freaky yet almost beautiful, in a way? there was so much feeling in their little actions and i was, like, gripping onto my table while reading this hrrngh. the whole time, i kept imagining jinki eating taemin's heart in an attempt to keep it away from everyone else and oh god. oh god the image of taemin just bleeding is kinda making me cry inside, but this was such a different, interesting story, i just can't help but like it a lot *A ( ... )

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spacecadetluci April 16 2010, 20:05:34 UTC
LOL I'M SORRY MY FONT FAILS. BUT I REALLY LIKED THIS LAYOUT AND. ;-;
That's probably the longest spot, I've gotten. xD

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HE DID EAT HIS HEART. tbh, haha, he really did.

But I'm glad that you liked it- I wasn't quite sure how to feel about it when I first wrote it, but I like how it turned out. BLEEDING TAEMIN AT THE END AND THE NEEDLES, A FEW PARAGRAPHS BEFORE THAT- scew it, THE WHOLE SCENE WHERE JINKI KILLS HIM IS JUST. I love it, LOL. They were my favorite parts to write (but I loved writing the whole thing).

Thank you, it means a lot to me! ♥ (omg you should totally do that ontae. IF YOU DO I CALL SPOT. :3)

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