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Dec 26, 2005 08:34

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Thank you! jedibuttercup December 27 2005, 09:01:13 UTC
I like. It read very much as though it could have happened on screen, even down to not feeling quite finished at the end; an episode in the life of, with Mal/River in it. Just what I was looking for. =)

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_minxy_ December 29 2005, 06:30:49 UTC
Oh, I like this! I like it for the 'day in the crazy life' and the almost-explained feel and moments. I like the notion that the series could have gone on for two more years and I just missed them and tuned in to this one one day.

Only the series, even with Joss at the helm, would be unlikely to have set up so many sweet relationships, and Kaylee all pregnant and tired, and Mal resenting that Simon did that to her, and Simon still crazy protective of River even though Mal is prepared to be protective enough for both of them.

This is so shiny. So, so shiny. And Mal just getting the hang of it all.

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