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[ana_grrl]

Oh, thank you very much! This was great to read!

Mal glared at him. "Don't matter, because this still ain't a date in any sort of way. We don't date, Jayne."

"You paid for my meal."

"On account of you not havin' any cash on you!"

Hee! Banter! And I can absolutely imagine this exchange between them. The stubborn/cunning look on Jayne's face. The incredulous and stubborn look on Mal's face. I enjoyed Mal's denial and Jayne's persistence. Thanks again!

behold the stylishly late comment!

[cathybites]

I'm so glad that you liked this! it was my first Firefly fic and I had fun with it, especially the dialogue.

[bugchicklv]

Not mine...but DAYUM!

*loves*

[cathybites]

oy, so late in commenting back, but thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed. ^_^

[lemniskate]

man, this was so vivid it seriously challenged my claustrophobia ;) but so cool. snappy and fun, and hot, hot, hot :)

[cathybites]

oh man, I hate small spaces, too, but figures Jayne would make the most of the situation, eh? ^_^

[janissa11]

Heeeee! LOVE this!

Jayne sat up a little. "We land on this rock and first thing you do is ask me to go to town with you."

"As back-up. Last time I was here, I...well, I might've upset a few...dozen people."

"That's a surprise, what with that charmin' personality of yours."

And this cracked me up. This is SO Mal and Jayne. Wonderful, and hot as hell!

[cathybites]

thank you so much! it was a lot of fun writing them. ^_^

[burningchaos]

I love Jayne, and you nailed him.

[cathybites]

you nailed him

I *wish*.

er. I mean...

thank you! :D