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Dec 01, 2004 20:48

I dont know what it is but I have been writing a lot. Tons of things have been going on and I have found contentment in sitting down with paper and pen and letting it all out. I am in the sharing mood and although some of these I label as personal.. I am willing to share! I would like feedback! So.. uh.. enjoy ( Read more... )

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illshoot_ullrun December 1 2004, 18:53:59 UTC
I love it I love it I love it<- Molly Shannon SNL but i really do love it!

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shakebumbum December 1 2004, 19:16:10 UTC
I cant believe you come up with this stuff withouth the help of dictionary.com!

"Tap, Tap, Tap
Youe hear that?
The pulse
The expression of the opus
Is an astry murmer of the beat
The scream is internal
And external is the hum
Drawing everyone in with the sound
I look out behond the bright lights
Cheers and words sung by all in the tune of one voice fill my ears
I am in a state of fame
Something I have never known the feeling of
Nor ever thought would conqor my shyness
The music plays on
And I sing"

I think Im getting it but then Im not sure...translate?

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sparextire December 1 2004, 19:51:11 UTC
its about trying to overcome my fear of singing in front of others. It's how I would love my life to be.. but until that moment when I push all the worry and shyness aside.. I will have to read it over and over! lol

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amtreble December 1 2004, 22:11:44 UTC
hope to talk to you soon :D

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indy3eb December 1 2004, 22:59:01 UTC
Powerful. You're a poet and a sweet soul.

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sparextire December 2 2004, 06:40:37 UTC
why thank you ;)

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thistiredcliche December 2 2004, 17:45:52 UTC
wowowowowow. but, i definitely see some coheed influences!!

that's ok, these little tid-bits rock.

you should keep a poetry journal or something. it'd be cool.

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sparextire December 2 2004, 18:49:34 UTC
lol yeah.. i stole some from coheed! but do u blame me?! They write some amazing shit!

Yeah.. I keep a journal.. tis fun!

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