fanfic100 challenge! 093. Thanksgiving

[sparkism]

Title: Naivety
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Characters: Xigbar, Demyx, Pocahontas
Prompt: 093. Thanksgiving
Word Count: 555
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Kingdom Hearts is, most obviously, owned by big name companies and not by a girl sitting at a laptop on her bedroom floor.
Summary: Overcoming suspicion is a hard thing to do, but Xigbar figures Pocahontas is

Comments

[ririum]

THIRTEEN MELONS.

[ririum]

WAIT. I GOTT ADD ASCH TO THAT.

[ririum]

WTF. GOTTA, NOT GOTT.

[ririum]

UM. THIRTEEN RED MELONS.

[tunasaladsonnet]

SO AWESOME. SO SO SO AWESOME. You got Poca's personality down perfectly, methinks.

Also, I totally do that thing where you switch verb tenses in the middle of the story too.

[sparkism]

>.< ♥ Yay, thank you!

I started writing the action in past tense and it took me like, a minute to figure out why it wasn't jiving well with what I'd already written. xD

[coriopsis]

I've been so out of touch with KH that I didn't even realise KH Re:CoM was coming out in the US soon. Last time I checked with khinsider, there was just a strong probability that they'd bring the game over eventually. XP

Demyx still rocks, though.

[sparkism]

xDD
I have it on my Christmas list, but I'm a very weak person and will probably buy it ASAP.

♥

[coriopsis]

I bought KHII:FM+ while I was in Japan a year ago, but I haven't beaten Re:CoM yet. I'm stuck on my first fight with Vexen and he keeps kicking Sora's butt. I really suck at the card attacks. I prefer old-fashioned X button mashing. (Actually, the jump and attack buttons are switched on FM+ to make it doubly confusing.) XD