Comments | sparkles578: It's eleven o'clock and I'm at home!!!!

sparkles578

It's eleven o'clock and I'm at home!!!!

Mar 21, 2006 11:30

Today is a better day. I'm not feeling as sick as I was yesterday, and there's no school!!!! Heck, I probably would've missed it anyway, but I get to stay home!!!!! Now I can make sure that I get all my homework done!!! WoOt!!!!! My throat still hurts, though ( Read more... )

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anonymous March 22 2006, 01:56:34 UTC

I like the poem it is just i dont like the fact that it sounds so fake and forced. it makes us think that u r doing this just to write and not to express any actually emotions. poems arent poems unless they are part of u. this sounds so forced, like all u r trying to do is keep up with the rest of the world when they say that they can write poems and then all they do is make stuff up that never even happened. if this comes from inside, then more power to you because the your thoughts are beautifully put together, but if it doesnt then i dont know what to say. dont force the thought because it makes things worse and people get false images about u.

pale_spirit March 22 2006, 02:33:55 UTC

I agree that forced poetry is pointless, but I can't help but wonder, who are you?

marco33 March 22 2006, 02:46:05 UTC

WTF!!!!! It doesnt sound forced, it sounds real, and it seems like there's something in it that speaks to me and you really have no idea what your talking about. I mean really her poetry is great, and it doesnt sound forced at all. The only thing that i think differently about her is how great of a writer she is! FAKE!!! AGH!!! it's amazing, and it sounds so real, idk what you're talking about. whatever.

dead_immortal March 22 2006, 03:02:35 UTC

I'll force this comment...up your ass.

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(directed to carey) marco33 March 22 2006, 02:47:57 UTC

ignore what that person is saying!!! you have a talent and you should use it!!

anonymous March 23 2006, 01:20:53 UTC

i wasnt "dogging" on the poem at all, it just seems to me that it was all made to write a poem and not convey actual emotions, dont start this crap of fighting over live journal because it is so immature and pointless, i am not going to wast my time fighting with you people because it simply isnt worth it. i like the poem i really do, i was just stating an opinion, that is the whole point to leaving comments, it is to express an opinion and i can think what i want, if you dont like what i think, then dont read my comments, it is just that simple, now, please do continue to write poems, they are amazing, it is just, i like ones that convey emotions, and from what u have said, it isnt how you are feeling when u write, it is just thoughts and words formed together.

sparkles578 March 23 2006, 01:24:58 UTC

Okay, I admit, I did kinda rush into this one, but it expresses my true emotions. And thanks for liking my poem

anonymous March 23 2006, 01:37:21 UTC

I do agree the poem is good but it does sound forced. Deep thought but forced thoughts. I would also like to say that I dot really care for the aaabbb rhyme scheme other than that it is ok.

pale_spirit March 25 2006, 04:49:15 UTC

I'd still like to know who you are.