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Aug 12, 2008 21:53



I moved my mouth slowly to her neck, where her pulse beats the hardest.  I inhaled and exhaled cautiously against her smooth skin.  Her heartbeat grew faster and faster and then, to my own pleasure, she whispered my name.  Words of love escaped her lips.  This was literally the sweetest song I’d ever heard in my entire existence.

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pairing: edward and bella, fanfic: twilight

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bre2004 August 13 2008, 06:26:44 UTC
The subtle blend came back to my nostrils once again and then, I growled.

*GAH!*

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sparkling_gold August 13 2008, 14:16:24 UTC
I'm glad you liked it, Soulmate! And what can I say? I love it when Edward growls. ;)

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realdetective August 13 2008, 20:05:28 UTC
Growling!Edward...XD

I love how you paired Edward's love for Bella's scent with music ("Words of love escaped her lips. This was literally the sweetest song I’d ever heard in my entire existence." or "She’s still my mia cantante.")

Lovely :D

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sparkling_gold August 13 2008, 21:17:46 UTC
Thanks J.j! I'm glad you liked it. :)

And you see, I didn't even see the parallel between her scent and music. :p

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