1st Sparky Santa fic: "It all started with you"

Dec 25, 2011 20:31

Title: It all started with you (could you be my end, too?)
Receiver: anuna_81
Pairing: John/Elizabeth
Rating: PG
A/N: Written for anuna_81. There's snow, and a Staind song, which I hope counts as rock. Merry Christmas, hun!! The song is "Tangled Up In You" by Staind.
Disclaimer: Nothing belongs to me.

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anuna_81 December 25 2011, 20:01:34 UTC
Oh, that was so wonderful! Just what a Christmas story should be like, and I LOVE the song (just the kind of music that I LOVE). :) How I didn't discover this band before - it sure counts as rock!

I love their dialogue - it's just spot on, light and flirty and there's that something just beneath the surface. I adore the end. THANK YOU. THANK YOU SO MUCH. This was perfect!!!

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ankareeda December 25 2011, 23:38:50 UTC
Awwwww, that was so wonderful! ♥♥♥ Amazing work!

Without saying a word, he tugged on her gently until she was sitting against him, his arms wrapped around her waist. It was incredibly awkward and his stomach erupted in butterflies, but he didn’t plan on letting her go until their backup arrived.

“Merry Christmas, ‘Lizabeth,” he said quietly, his breath ghosting through her air and across her neck.

She placed her hands over his.

Awwwwwwwwwwwww. ♥♥♥

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mathgirl24 December 26 2011, 02:29:00 UTC
This story is all kinds of wonderful! Great job!!!!

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vickysg1 December 26 2011, 17:49:21 UTC
This story is just awesome!! It's perfect!

She gave him a quizzical look even as she let him help her up, and the expression turned warm when he sat down behind her, his legs open. Without saying a word, he tugged on her gently until she was sitting against him, his arms wrapped around her waist.
This is most probably my favorite part!

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drewandian December 26 2011, 20:06:57 UTC
so cute! love it!

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