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[tidal_race]

Title: She Doesn't Ask
Author:
Rating:PG
Summary: June Challenge #4
A/N: This hasn't seen a beta, but I wanted to get it out there before I go on vacation. A sequel from John's point of view might follow if anybody likes this one.

Comments

[alianne]

That's really nice, love it!!

You should write a sequel!! :)

[tidal_race]

I'm going to be at the ocean for a week without housework duties so I'll try my best.

[alianne]

ooh, that sounds nice!!
Have fun!! :)

BTW what book is that they're talking about there? Heathcliff.. soul mate... classic... sounds familiar. wuthering heights?

[tidal_race]

That would be the one.

[world_of_blade]

How wonderful! I love that she found out so quickly that John was just lazy. I agree with everyone you should do a sequel. Have a fun time at the beach.

[tidal_race]

I'll try. You know it's just so hard to have fun when you're in a resort town with no serious responsibilities.

[vickysg1]

Awww!
That's cute!
I hope you'll write a sequel!

[tidal_race]

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. It felt really bittersweent to write it. The one from John's pov will probably explore how Elizabeth has changed since she was in college.

[agentcat47]

More? Please?

[tidal_race]

As soon as I finish my fics for Wild West Atlantis I'll start working on it.

[world_of_blade]

Yay! You are one of my all time favorite writers, so the more the better! :)

[chaya_rules]

I love the small implications and the acknowledgements of reality in the ending. Sparky isn't all hearts and flowers, and it's best written when the unfortunate realities are kept in perspective. Also, may I just say thank you for having a good natural sense of SPaG. I've been reading through the older challenge entries and wincing. This made it all better.

[tidal_race]

Thank you for the thoughtful review. I'm glad my grammar was to your liking. *g*

If you want to read some more of my stories I've got several things posted at wildwest_lantis. You can find it on my friends list.