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sparkysoar

The True Charm of Charms Lessons

Jun 13, 2008 02:24

Title: The True Charm of Charms Lessons
Pairing: Ginny/Luna
Rating: G
Summary: An encounter in charms lessons leads to explosions
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters no matter how much I wish I did

Swish and flick

The motion was being repeated across the room

Swish and flick

Ginny kept practicing. Concentrating on not staring at the pale eyes and ( Read more... )

luna, ginny

Comments 5

vampiregirl_133 June 13 2008, 09:07:10 UTC

my god i love it it so sweet and i love it its great keep up the good work

katielovessean June 13 2008, 10:59:12 UTC

i loved it. it was very nice. keep up the good work

holyfant June 13 2008, 13:05:15 UTC

Very nice! I like how it's so short, but you still draw a very clear (and pretty!) picture.

(tiny concrit: "is meet" should be "is met", and maybe "a few grumbles" would be better than "few grumbles"? :) )

sparkysoar June 13 2008, 18:49:41 UTC

Thanks for the concrit. I didn't get this on the computer until about 2 in the morning so I'm sure there are a few mistakes. Thanks for the heads up!

I don't normally like drabbles but.... arobynsung June 20 2008, 05:22:38 UTC

This is sweet.
You should enter it into the drabble-a-thon being promo-ed on hp_girlslash.