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What's Done in the Dark

Mar 19, 2013 00:48

Title: What's Done in the Dark
Rating: Hard PG-13.
Words: ~3,500
Spoilers: None really, completely AU.
Warnings: Violence, language, child abuse, reasonably minor gore, briefly hinted-at sexual abuse, psychological issues, general misery, very very terrible father!John, psychotic!Sam, broken!lost!Dean. Not a happy story.
Summary: John Winchester's ( Read more... )

alternate universe hurray!, actual puppy sammy winchester, dean winchester is saved, john winchester is an uncertain beast, supernatural, bobby singer finally has a tag, blargh, fanfiction omfg!, sparrow needs a cigarette, whumpy dean is my new toy, what am i doing

Comments 19

prufrock_26 March 19 2013, 15:17:33 UTC

YOU DID IT SPARROW YOU DID IIITTTT

Like, wow. There is so much that is good about this (including the french fry in the milkshake: why is that so sibling-like and yet so sinister to me at the same time? idek), but the way you've managed to weave in all of these tiny little bits of canon in a way that makes so much SENSE is incredible. And it's not just the details: the characterization is so, so excellent, because it's so uncomfortably close to canon. Dean and Sam read like--themselves, but tilted a few degrees in the wrong direction. If that makes any sense. Also there's a ton of good serial killerness here and it's really exciting my serial killer nerd and yeah ALSO JOHNNY CASH AND 'NAM UGH LET ME DIE HAPPY

sparrow_lately March 23 2013, 23:13:35 UTC

I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT AND I AM SO SORRY THIS COMMENT IS SO LATE

Sam and Dean will be Sam and Dean in any universe, I think, even when everything else is completely wrong.

And yay serial killer nerdiness. <3

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sparrow_lately March 23 2013, 23:14:25 UTC

I really, really love the idea of Sam getting off on sleeping with girls then tricking his brother into killing them. What does that say about me? Nothing good, I'm sure.

THANK YOU. <3

katsheswims March 19 2013, 22:32:18 UTC

This hurt so much to read.

Very well written(!) but so sad and disturbing.

sparrow_lately March 23 2013, 23:14:37 UTC

Thank you!!

sleepypercy March 20 2013, 06:17:50 UTC

Oh wow, this is amazing and scary. I just how you twisted their family; fucked up those relationships and especially Dean. Great job!

sparrow_lately March 23 2013, 23:14:56 UTC

Thank you!

pervinca March 28 2013, 02:45:01 UTC

Wow. This is so dark and haunting. DEANNNNNN. I can't even deal with my feelings for this poor broken boy.

And BOBBY. /gross sobbing

sparrow_lately April 1 2013, 05:41:29 UTC

I JUST SAW THIS I APOLOGIZE

Thank you! I'm glad you liked--liked?--Bobby's cameo. Poor Bobby. :(