Ebony-Eyed Truth

[sparrows_lass]

TITLE: Ebony-Eyed Truth (Sequal to Black-Winged Freedom and Raven-Veiled Affection)
WORDCOUNT: 1.490
SUMMARY: In Veracruz, Elizabeth meets a very charming tailor . . .
DISCLAIMER: I own nothing but the plot.
A/N: Well, this is the end of the Darkness Series and I hope you like it ;) Most importantly, though, this last piece of the series is 100%

Comments

[luvvycat]

Oh, I'm so glad you wrote this! :-) When I first read "Black-Winged Freedom" I was so distraught at the thought that Jack might actually have killed himself! To see him reappear here, with a brand-new identity -- well, let's just say I'm every bit as happy as Lizzie was to see him turn up alive and well!

And what a great "recast" for Jack -- a ladies' dressmaker! He certainly is intimately acquainted with the female form, and I can't say his clientele wouldn't derive a great deal of pleasure having him personally "size them up" for a fitting! ;-)

Love this part:

He couldn’t take it. It was too much

[sirius4ever_1]

Dear sparrow's lass!

I can't thank you enough for this beautiful story. I truly love it. Every.bit.of.it!

Even though it's late, please allow me to comment a bit about it. Isn't it Captain Jack-ish? Of course he would be savvy with ladies' dresses!

Like my fellow commentor I liked the insinuation of other Johnny Depp Characters, though I took myself the liberty to find more than just one:
- His trainee is called Todd! And you use the term "a proper artist with a needle (Sweeney Tood: with a knife).
- As a matter of fact, Tarrant (the hatter) also quickly sews a dress for "tiny Alice". and of course:
- DJDM,

It's a great story, I can truly imagine them both, eaten between longing and denial until finally they couldn't!
You brought excellently out a certain tense atmosphere, just great!

Thank you so much for the generous gift.

Will you send you an e-mail!