Porn and shaving. Shaving porn.

[sparseparsley]

Title: Unguarded
Author: Sparseparsley
Rating: NC-17
Genre/Pairing: PWP, Dean/Cas
Wordcount: 3500, holy shit.
Spoilers: Inspired by the stills from 5.04, so up to those. See the cut for spoilery summary and notes.
Warnings: Sex, cussing, metaphors, Dean says 'baby' a lot.
Feedback: Yuhuh, please.

Comments

[clockstopper]

If only, man. If only.

This was so hot and I've got the secret guilty pleasure in loving the word baby during sex scenes. I'm a huge sucker for it. I can so see Dean doing it (I mean he calls his car baby. He's so the type to say things like that in bed.) and Cas being thrown by it.

Oh so hot and oh so lovely and I'm totally not bothered by the porn outweighing the non-porn. Though I have to say I feel there's a perfect blend of both. It feels like there could be more set in this if you felt like it, but also feels complete. The perfect little snapshot of their lives and still them, but with the hint of darker because it's the future.

Seriously, this was very, very satisfying.

[sparseparsley]

Wow...you are awesome. I actually read this comment last night but I was too tired to write a proper response. I did, however, go to bed with a very warm fuzzy feeling. Thanks for that!

I was a little worried about the 'baby's at first but they seemed so natural to Dean (well, the Dean in my head) that I went with it, and I'm glad I did. I haven't really thought about more yet, though it could happen. I'd like to see what the actual episode does first, though.

Also, I read some of your journal and hello matching fan path. I'm a pretty recent addition to the Supernatural fandom too, via SGA and Torchwood. I know what you mean with the standing around and going 'What the fuck?' because, seriously, what the fuck.

[clockstopper]

Ha, it's totally fine. Glad to leave good comments. I always try and think of just what to say because I know people like getting nice, long, thoughtful comments and I try to give them

[sparseparsley]

I'm not sold on the fact that Cas would go from terrified of women in a whorehouse to lets all have an orgy.

Indeed. It makes me wonder which way they're going to lean with it. Will it be Angel-Dick trickery or an actual peek at the future? Sadly, I may miss the friggin episode tonight so everyone here will know before me and I will be wildly broken up about it. Well, maybe not wildly.

I can't even get myself to watch the fifth season.

Not even 'The Shrine'? Not gonna lie, I cried like a baby. I'm one to talk though, I haven't seen the last two episodes myself. Spoiled the hell out of them, though.

You mind if I friend you? I know I saw you around when I was lurking in the SGA fandom but it looks like I'm going to be way more involved in this one.

[sparseparsley]

Thanks! Dean just seems to me like a person who does what he knows because that's what he knows.

God that's a pretty icon. Thank you for reading!

[juanitatequila]

My gawd that was ridiculously HAWWWWWWWWWT!!!! <3

[sparseparsley]

That's a lot of double-u's right there. Dean approved ones, too! Thanks for liking it!

[queeniegalore]

Ok, wow. This has got to be the SEXIEST Dean/Cas I've ever read. I'm serious. It was so...sulty and dirty and tender and hot and GUH, just really really good. And really well written, too.

I'm rambling a little. I think you fried my brain\. What I really want to say is THANK YOU for writing this!

[sparseparsley]

No no, thank YOU for the feedback! I mean, sexiest ever? Wow, thank you.

[entangled_now]

This is so intimate and careful and hot. I love it!

[sparseparsley]

Ooh, 'careful', I like that. Thanks for reading!