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sparseparsley

2009 AU/Fusion Challenge Fic

Oct 30, 2009 17:38

Title: Peanut Butter-Pumpkin Wedding Cake
Author: sparseparsley
Rating: NC-17 overall, PG-13 right now
Genre/Pairing: Total AU, Romantic Comedy, Dean/Cas
Wordcount: 4k for this part, should be between 15k and 20k total
Spoilers: None
Warnings: Sex, movie clichés
Feedback: I wants it, my precious.
Summary: The good ones are sometimes assholes and always taken. ( Read more... )

fic-a-frack, dean/cas, spn is mouse herpes

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sparseparsley October 31 2009, 16:02:11 UTC

Thanks!

All this awesome feedback is excellent motivation.

spilled_notes October 31 2009, 07:46:29 UTC

THIS NEEDS TO BE CONTINUED, LIKE, YESTERDAY.

Characterizations? Check. Sexy pre-slash? Check. Castiel-being-sexass? Check. Wanting-to-jump-Dean's-bones? Check. (Especially on my part.) Sticking to the plot? Check.

Also, keeping the nature of Cas and Anna's relationship secret is pretty awesome. It keeps me very intrigued. I want to know more. NOW. D:<

AND ANNA/CHUCK? STOP, I THINK I AM STARTING TO LIKE IT.

sparseparsley October 31 2009, 16:05:01 UTC

Thank you! You made a list, I fucking love lists.

I think Chuck is my little-black-dress. Dean goes with Cas and Cas goes with Dean but Chuck goes with EVERYONE.

spilled_notes November 1 2009, 02:52:44 UTC

LISTS ARE THE BEST THINGS EVAR~

Also, he does. I think it's the glasses. (And the fact that I'm a Chuck!girl.)

22by7 October 31 2009, 08:00:20 UTC

Wow, that is some fracking hilarious use of Spn's supporting cast. Ellen as club owner/bouncer! TESSA! <333 And I reserve an amused D: for Al, that was a stroke of genius. And Anna's gurlfrenz. Oh god. Perfect.

Castiel is his usual weird self, I see, gravitating towards Dean and coming on hot and heavy with the eyesexin'.

WHY DID IT STOP THERE. I know, I know, there will be more. Thank god. BUT I WANT IT NOW. Ffff.

sparseparsley October 31 2009, 16:07:50 UTC

ME TOO! I want to travel to the future where I'm already done writing it. Chuck is right, writing is hard.

Thanks! I will admit that I snickered to myself over Al. He's such a creeper.

newkidfan October 31 2009, 08:10:20 UTC

Oh yay! I'm loving it so far. I so needed a well-written fluffy AU. :)

sparseparsley October 31 2009, 16:08:57 UTC

Thank you! I wasn't sure I'd be much good at fluffy AUs but it's been really fun so far!

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sparseparsley October 31 2009, 16:12:32 UTC

Nah, I'm going with the standard Dean cliche, he's also a car mechanic. There aren't going to be any supernatural elements in this world. Or, if there are, none of these guys know about it.

Thanks for reading! I live the phrase 'bright focus' and I may steal it from you. :p