something i've been working on

[sparta_bk]

Here’s a piece I’ve been working on. I don’t consider myself a writer, and it’s far from good, but I’ll share it with you anyways

Comments

[hodateelmundo]

I like it. I especially like the ending, it adds a more comic effect to it and lightens up the audience for whatever may come next. I would deffinitely do that piece for an audition if it was in a published play.