This could really benefit from a neater flow. I'm not very helpful because I can't tell you how to get that. Either go all out with the run-ons or reign them in maybe.
I like the juxtaposition of you trying to deflect their judgement while you judge in your sarcasm.
yes. I really need to eliminate the judging of them. I don't intend it, but it's like problem with ethnography, i guess. See, this is what I'm looking for, so I can eliminate things like that... and... yeah, probably. there should probably be more to make it smoother. Probably "lies" should go...
thanks! i needed that.
hehe, probably... i should probably get a better word.
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I like the juxtaposition of you trying to deflect their judgement while you judge in your sarcasm.
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thanks! i needed that.
hehe, probably... i should probably get a better word.
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