Fic: The Catalan Opening, Part III (Fútbol, gen/various)

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Title: The Catalan Opening, Part III
Fandom: Fútbol
Pairing: Puyol/Piqué (hear, hear, Dr Sid!), various others
Rating: PG-13 for language and violence
Word count: ~4400 this chapter (~14000 so far)
Summary: AU cop dramedy. Police Chief Carles Puyol hunts for a killer and, in the process of doing so, saves his own life. A very loose interpretation of the

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[kitty69lover]

i laughed. and i got quite teary eyed too, Working Experience Boy oh my god. i, i think i may not be able to read anything with Bojan in it once he leaves....

but anyway, i loved this! so well written, i love how the first part of the chapter was all fun and games and cute then bam, all srs and dark and sad.

RVP obvs doesn't deserve Rafa's love. that straight shouldered donkey faced fuck using the precious kid? he deserved to die, imo.

love your writing, oh especially the bits in the brackets. this is very good and i love [hate actually] the cliffhanger!!

more soon? plz :DDD

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Thank you! :D I'm so glad you liked the brackety bits, I wasn't sure about them at first. And I've remedied the cliffhanger; the next part's already up (unbelievable, I know!).

[bleeding_dry]

I've just read all three parts in one go :D I guess I let this one slip by twice because I'm usually not a fan of AU, but I'm glad I finally read it.

It's just great - the humor, the plot, the characters, your writing. I'm absolutely hooked. Please don't take too long to update it? *puppy eyes*

And I have absolutely no idea who the pale knight might be...

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Thanks for giving this a shot! Glad you liked it. And I think I've made the pale knight mystery pretty obvious in the last part, but let me know if I'm wrong about that. :P

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Thank you! :D :D I love your comments, you always notice my favourite things.

Real Life Thiago is driving me a bit crazy with his slight diva-ish tendencies, but his dorky love for Rafinha will be forever perfect, let us hope... ;)

[meretricula]

AHHH THIS IS SO AWESOME

not enough words for how happy protective!Thiago makes me. Doña Guardiola. Pique having the hots for Zlatan the lawyer. Work Experience.

so glad you kept going with this fic. it is hugely entertaining. can't wait to see where it goes next!

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Thank you thank you :D Glad you liked lady Guardiola-- Pep would make such a sexy, formidable woman.

[abitof_m0nkeys]

ahhhh why am i just finding this now?!

“Oh. Sure,” Piqué said, still looking a little forlorn. He twisted the picture of Carles in his hands.

Piqué slapped his knee, interrupting himself. "We should go to the zoo!"

hahahhaha your pique omg. he's so good in this, like the comic relief is so necessary cause of the kinda serious-ish nature of the story and so on point. and him and carlos -- pee and poo, tweedle dee and tweedle dum -- are so perfect. aiii gotta go read the next chapter.