Pictures in my head of the final destination

Nov 25, 2005 18:21

How does it feel you ask? It will answer you now, it's words will fill these worlds Well, i've held that which no one else touched, so imagine my arrogance, my rapture, but with my hands so fluid, i dropped it. But in my arrogance i took my time to admire it's beauty as it descended and in that short time of carelessness and calousness ( Read more... )

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gunna_get_worse November 25 2005, 19:47:19 UTC
Whoah. It's too late at night for me process this. Real comment will be left here tomorrow.

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Real Comment. gunna_get_worse November 26 2005, 19:43:10 UTC
Ok, so I'm assuming this is about Hallie. Rather, I know it is because you told me so. I'm guessing you asw her with another guy, or heard about her being with another guy...Implied in the fifth through seventh lines. So I'm guessing you heard about this or whtever, and you feel lonely and replaced. You feel like you gave it your all and put everything you had into loving her and she all of the sudden has your instant replacement. Must've been how coffee beans felt when people came up with the idea for instant coffee. And now I'm guessing by what you've said here, she came back to you and you to talked and all she could say to you was "so...how've you been?" kinda things. And now you both feel like maybe working things out, or one of you hinted at the possibility of getting together someday again (implied in lines thirty-five through thirty-eight), but you don't know if she's still the person you fell in love with. And the sheer idea of that is just ripping you apart inside. Well, if it's any consolation, I know what its like when ( ... )

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