let me know what you all think

[speaksuneasy_]

Trying my hand at a song, this is the first-draft

Comments

[gunna_get_worse]

i am immaculate indecent and tempted to teach you
to see yourself
may i be as graceful under your thumb
i want her, inked and uncontrollable
i want her strong and soft
i want her for mine
i want it all
or nothing at all

That's the shit that all girls want to hear about themselves from boys. I envy every woman you'll ever love. *pouts*

Other than that, I like it. : )

maybe i'll pass this on to leigh....

[speaksuneasy_]

glad you liked it