i don't like it.

[speaksuneasy_]

Oddly enough, Melancholy is not who she used to be. Funny the way you think they'll never change. Her eyes are green now and her lips always parted, making her seem to be on the verge of speaking, or on the brink of a kiss

Comments

[girlspeak]

Did you write that?
Is your subject line expressing displeasure at you having written it?

Because I like it.
It's really very good.

Very Very Good.

xo

indeed

[speaksuneasy_]

Yes i wrote it and yes i am displeased with how it came out. mostly because it is not the original idea i started with. But i am glad that you like it. It still isn't a patch on your writing though.