my poem

[special_blonde]

Best Friends

I am wishing
     on this star,
That you will come
     and take me in your car.
We could ride
     into the sun,
And you will be
     my number one.

rate my poem...1-5; 5 being the best.
45 more days of school left
24 more days till my birfday
♥♥♥♥

Comments

[xmun_keyxluverx]

a 5! wonderful! i luv it!
happy almost birthday!!!!
<333333
comment bac plz..

-allysa

[special_blonde]

thank you soo much allysa
and thank you again
haha
<33

[curlieqclutz]

u r 2 funny nicole i give ur poem a 25 thats more than a 5:)
luv u
starbucks ♥luvr
♥shirin♥

[special_blonde]

aww thanx shirin
i love youu

[anonymous]

uh .. how old are you .. that poem is like 2th grade level ..

[special_blonde]

oh thank you so much
why dont you leave your name
or are you in second grade and cant spell it?

[xxtoxicxx]

5! haha love u
sorri u dont like *$ ne more
ur missin out!
<33

[special_blonde]

pssh! no way i am so not!!
love youu

[_x_my_heart]

these people are dense to think that poem was a 5.
it wasnt bad, and i see you have the ability and shit, so write something more deep.

and by the way, poems don't have to rhyme, but if they do,
the "on this star" and ""take me in your car" shoud have the same amount of syllables.
that makes it very difficult to flowwwww.

btw, idk you. byebye<3