The Carver (7/8)

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Title: The Carver
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Horror
Characters: Dean, Sam
Pairings: none
Disclaimer: I do not own or lay claim to anything related to Supernatural.
Summary: Something is carving people up like jack-o-lanterns. When the boys take a case on Halloween, Dean revisits high school from a new perspective, Sam explores his hatred

Comments

[erinrua]

Cliff. Hanging. Me. ;-)

Very well done, good pacing and tension that makes my nerves jangle. Next, please! *G*

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Thanks, glad to know the pacing and tension is working! Next chapter coming right up!

[iamstealthyone]

Very exciting chapter here, with all the tension involving Miss Carver taking first Audrey and then Dean.

Favorite lines:

The members of the audience had risen from their seats like a unified, amorphous amoeba;

Good analogy.

“What-no you’re not!” Marty’s voice shot up in pitch, face reddening, completely flustered.

He had nothing. Dean shook his head. “No I’m not.

*g*

“Okay. I need to find her body, then. I might need your help.”

Audrey seemed to push through the shock and fear marring her features. “You’re… a janitor.”

Tee hee.