simplicity: a Love Story in eight
Nino/Ohno | R, 3229 words
A giant giant giant thank you to
harinezumi_kun for her fic
The Book of Love which completely inspired this, from start to finish. I have never written something this long and actually finished it, like, ever, in this fandom. Early happy birthday to
waxrose !
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At first, Nino can't comprehend it. )
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The tension you're building up is jghlskj simply amazing. Beautiful
"Fuck," he says out loud, and Ohno laughs at what to him is a greeting, and Nino is trying really hard not to blurt out the realisation that- that-
In spite of it all, Nino knows one thing for sure:
It's something they just maybe call Love.
Cliffhanger. Unfinished sentences. Idk, I love it, especially because the finishing is in the last part
Ohno's fingers are wrapped around his pulse and somehow it amplifies the feeling and it's all Nino can think: Ohno can feel his heart.
Cute! and Beautiful!
"It makes perfect sense," Nino says. But he's not talking about the movie anymore. And maybe he actually means it.
<3
Nino knows in that instant, more than any before it, that he is absolutely and unreservedly under.
On one hand, things snowball from there;
"Nn," Ohno says again, a little more desperately this time, and Nino completely agrees.
Nino can't decide whether to cry or laugh or both.I love the choice of words. And somehow Ohno's simple "Nn," ( ... )
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especially because the finishing is in the last part <-- yessss yay you noticed this!
you should totally comment more often it makes me really haaaaappy ;D
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