[Arashi] simplicity: a Love Story in eight

Aug 23, 2010 11:19

simplicity: a Love Story in eight
Nino/Ohno | R, 3229 words
A giant giant giant thank you to harinezumi_kun for her fic The Book of Love which completely inspired this, from start to finish. I have never written something this long and actually finished it, like, ever, in this fandom. Early happy birthday to waxrose !

At first, Nino can't comprehend it. )

r: r, s: one-shot, p: nino/ohno, f: arashi

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rio_sora August 23 2010, 06:59:51 UTC
oho~i'm speechless but i love it^^ thanks a lot for sharing! <3

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honeypuffed August 23 2010, 09:48:17 UTC
no no, thank you for your comment! ♥

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jadeswallow August 23 2010, 15:58:39 UTC
LOVE THIS!

The tension you're building up is jghlskj simply amazing. Beautiful

"Fuck," he says out loud, and Ohno laughs at what to him is a greeting, and Nino is trying really hard not to blurt out the realisation that- that-

In spite of it all, Nino knows one thing for sure:

It's something they just maybe call Love.

Cliffhanger. Unfinished sentences. Idk, I love it, especially because the finishing is in the last part

Ohno's fingers are wrapped around his pulse and somehow it amplifies the feeling and it's all Nino can think: Ohno can feel his heart.
Cute! and Beautiful!

"It makes perfect sense," Nino says. But he's not talking about the movie anymore. And maybe he actually means it.
<3

Nino knows in that instant, more than any before it, that he is absolutely and unreservedly under.

On one hand, things snowball from there;

"Nn," Ohno says again, a little more desperately this time, and Nino completely agrees.

Nino can't decide whether to cry or laugh or both.I love the choice of words. And somehow Ohno's simple "Nn," ( ... )

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honeypuffed August 23 2010, 16:11:41 UTC
THIS COMMENT, UNF HI

especially because the finishing is in the last part <-- yessss yay you noticed this!

you should totally comment more often it makes me really haaaaappy ;D

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jadeswallow August 23 2010, 16:59:58 UTC
I shall do my best then (because some fics deserved quoting to point out its amazingness) <3

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honeypuffed August 23 2010, 17:02:29 UTC
!! ♥♥♥

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aoihikari August 24 2010, 10:16:18 UTC
I SAW FABULOUS IN THERE.
... )

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honeypuffed August 24 2010, 11:55:49 UTC

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still_ciircee August 25 2010, 03:54:37 UTC
Your writing is just so great. I LOVE this. I love everything about this. The way it builds up and the way it's not all easy and perfect and Nino's nerves and Ohno's acceptance--it's all so great.

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honeypuffed August 25 2010, 10:15:33 UTC
ttffffffff you flatter me too much ;n; ♥

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waxrose August 26 2010, 13:37:04 UTC
This is gorgeous. ILU, bb. ♥♥♥

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honeypuffed August 26 2010, 14:40:48 UTC
i love you moooore ♥♥♥

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