[Arashi] #familiarity.

[honeypuffed]

#familiarity.
Nino/Ohno | R, 2260 words
This has been really close to finished for quite a while, but there was a few bits that were strangely hard to write. AU! Mild AU, but AU nonetheless. Assignments? What are those! Blissfully ignoring reality is blissful.

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[harinezumi_kun]

OMG PLEASE LET ME BE FIRST

[harinezumi_kun]

sweet. now i'll go read it :D

[harinezumi_kun]

i love how kind of...up in the air all of this is. how we don't know too much about what came before or what the circumstances really are. sometimes that really drives me crazy in a fic, but here i think it really works - while i was reading it, i didn't really need to know the backstory, i just wanted to know what was going to happen next.

and i love the dialogue, sentences ending halfway through all over the place, it really set the mood for this. just lovely.

i also like that ohno takes the initiative when they finally run into each other again. i definitely think he would, despite how passive he's usually seems. let's get some more proactive ohno up in dis joint, mm.

also this: 'It's early.' Nino sighs. It really is. He rubs at the corner of an eye.
for some reason, i saw nino really really clearly in this moment, like, the way he's always rubbing his face with the flat of his hand? [/crazy person]

and this too: Nino considers pulling it back up like they do in the movies, but thinks better of it.i really like that he didn't

[honeypuffed]

this comment makes me so happy ;__; idk, by the end i wasn't sure if it really made sense anymore because i wrote it so all over the place, and you picking up all these little things that i was hoping would work is so relieving and just. THANK YOU. YOU ARE WONDERFUL ALSO. ♥

[rio_sora]

oh no, this is awesome, and i'm at loss of proper words, sorry!
but i love it, i love the tension, and i love the ending,
lovely, thanks a lot for sharing! :DDD

[honeypuffed]

thank you so much! :3

[coffee_hanjan]

I love the awkward dialogue when they're still in that sort of relationship limbo, and I also love how they're like magnets to each other. This has great tension and a really satisfying end. Thanks so much for sharing! It was lovely ♥

[honeypuffed]

and thank you very much for your comment! i'm glad to hear you liked it! ♥

[aikomidori]

Nino losing common sense when it comes to Ohno, I liked it 8)
Poor Ayane XD If I didn't love Ohmiya so much I'd probably have wanted to punch Nino...oh the things being biased makes you (not) do haha~

[honeypuffed]

haha, thanks for reading ♥!

[still_ciircee]

See, things like this are why I'm jealous of you and wish I could write better. This is just. It's beautiful. There's this flow and pacing to it that's so amazing--it's so fluid and smooth and yet you can tell how disjointed and off-pace things are for Nino, and for Ohno. And all the things Ohno says--you can hear the things he's NOT saying and then when he says them...seriously, my heart just melted.

Plus. Omg. I am such a sucker for stories where they're parted and met again and come back together. The way they feel, the confusion and longing and just. a;ldjf;llskj YES PLEASE.

I also really think you captured THEM. There's something about the way you've written them where I can SEE Ohno and Nino--the little gestures, the way they look at each other or don't and it's just. You have such a talent and I am envious. This was just a goreous piece of work.

[honeypuffed]

while i'm pretty sure i don't deserve a comment anywhere near as amazing as this (kfkgkfk) i'm going to just give you a giant thankyou!!!!♥ because atm i'm not sure i remember how to be coherent, and if at least procrastination has brought me this comment from you then maybe this shitty assignment was worth it for something. ;~; ♥ i am just going to sit here and read your comment over and over and inflate my ego to horrible proportions and disagree because really i'm jealous of you but whatever what can you do. i love you. coherency, whatever.