Fic: No Place For You Anymore 5/?

Jul 24, 2011 13:47

Title: Fic: No Place For You Anymore 5/?
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rooftop!luke, atwt, luke/reid, fic: no place for you anymore, noah who?

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limeybird2 July 24 2011, 20:31:54 UTC
woo-hoo..............Emma smacking his hand when he went to get food, only Reid can get food early, Emma knows who appreciates her hard work in the kitchen.

Lily always wore the tightest skimpiest dresses around Holden, good thing she couldn't breathe in them, if she could she would of popped right out of there & nobody would have to use what little imagination it would take to guess what she looked like naked.

Poor Noah, even the one who loved him the most has abandoned him, guess Lily opened her eyes & saw how well Reid treats Luke compared to how miserable Luke was with Noah.

Can't wait for the pain to be inflected on Noah while he has to listen to Luke & Reid making love in the barn............snicker.

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speechless16 July 24 2011, 21:01:35 UTC
Haha, of course Reid is the only one to get food early. He most definitely appreciates her hard work! And it keeps him from insulting the family (somewhat).

Seriously does Lily even own anything somewhat conservative? Nope. I was always concerned she would just pop out and say hello!

Yep, Noah has been abandoned. I really wanted to that to be obvious and having Lily accept Reid into the family (even though she still doesn't quite understand him) is going mess with Noah.

Hehe, the barn part in the next chapter... Oh yes. At first I was wondering if I should have that in the story but I was why not? So barn sex became a must. Let's just say Noah will get... educated?

Thanks for taking the time to read and review with your lovely comment! It made my day. :D

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speechless16 July 24 2011, 23:43:19 UTC
Aw thanks so much!

Hehe, I really enjoy having everyone love Reid. It's quite fun to write if I do say myself! Haha I didn't know Emma slapping Noah's hands would be such a big hit.

The barn. Things go down in there, that's for sure. :D

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speechless16 July 25 2011, 01:09:03 UTC
Haha, I do believe that Emma absolutely loves Reid! I mean who wouldn't? So, if that means she allows Reid extra favors here and there, who's to judge? :D

Your mind should be filled with images thats for sure. Noah's mind will have it as well. And that's something that doesn't ever leave you!

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tldreamer July 25 2011, 00:22:28 UTC
I enjoyed it! Delusional, paranoid (but not suave!) Noah!

Can't wait for barn sex and Noah's reaction! Bring it on!

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speechless16 July 25 2011, 01:05:24 UTC
Thank you! :D

Yes, Noah is all of those things! Ah, lovely barn sex. With Noah inside the barn as well. That is sure to make Noah come to his senses you think? Or not. :)

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ltklo July 25 2011, 22:09:58 UTC
I thoroughly enjoy the tone and humor.

Noah was hungrily devouring the sight of him when Luke's face broke into the biggest smile and launched himself into Reid's arms. Noah could describe this moment as a train wreck.

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speechless16 July 25 2011, 22:48:17 UTC
Thanks so much.

I didn't intend for the story to have such a sarcastic/humorous tone to it but it came out like that! So, I'm glad you enjoy it. :)

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kccalgal July 26 2011, 05:19:52 UTC
I'm getting in late on your story. I just read all the chapters tonight and I just love your delusional Noah. Idiot doesn't realize that maybe he should just leave so he deserves whatever you have planned for him.

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speechless16 July 26 2011, 14:12:39 UTC
Well I am very glad you read it! :D

Thanks, delusional Noah seems to be very popular and loved! I do have things planned for him, that's for sure.

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