Comments | spent9109: The man in black fled across the desert, and the gunslinger followed.

spent9109

The man in black fled across the desert, and the gunslinger followed.

Aug 22, 2006 12:43

Man I hate to say this but Stephen King is an awesome author. I just finished "THE DARK TOWER" series and it was quite amazing. Worth the time i spent reading its 2,000 some odd pages. It caused me to live like a hermit but the outcome is good, i've nearly finished the 1st draft of Planet Jumping now. I've written fity pages or more and revised ( Read more... )

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causticstorm August 22 2006, 19:38:02 UTC

That first chapter is A-fucking mazing....only thing is, there are to many chapters that begin with 'Seth did this' and the likes. Switch it up a little, and its perfecto.

speaking of which, gimme some artwork to do. My email is in my profile.

spent9109 August 23 2006, 02:49:26 UTC

Chapter 1: Attack in the Barrow Downs.
Chapter 2: Grief
Chapter 3: Moonmilk
Chapter 4: Neptune's Lounge
Chapter 5: The Twins
Chapter 6: The Black Ships
Chapter 7: Dreams and Handguns
Chapter 8: The Enemy Revealed
Chatper 9: Return to the Barrows
Chapter 10: Betrayals and Allies
Chapter 11: The Coming Storm

That is the chapter list as it now stands. Each chapter is around 30 pages now. I will give you character descriptions soon. : )

causticstorm August 23 2006, 03:56:49 UTC

SWEET.

therussianenemy August 22 2006, 19:47:37 UTC

Don't delete your LiveJournal, it's our only connector-factor right now! How else would you read my crazy rants and stupid ideas? Exactly!

Great writing as usual, I like it a lot. I'm really excited for you about your first draft almost being done, that's awesome. I know how hard you've worked on this book :)

spent9109 August 23 2006, 03:18:51 UTC

I don't think I'm going to delete it. I think that I am going to start using it more often now for posting select passages for feedback. Plus I do enjoy reading your rants your writing has become very refined and enjoyable to read. I haven't been reading anyone's post lately. Its freed me up alot not checking livejournal every hour on the hour. :)

therussianenemy August 23 2006, 08:59:48 UTC

I've been telling you to do that for a while now ;) Feedback is priceless.

Thanks dude, that's very nice of you to say =)

LiveJournal has been consuming my life lately. Lately? I mean for the past four or five months. Perhaps longer. Who really knows? But yeah, I totally get what you mean about checking it every hour. I think I might be o-b-s-e-s-s-e-d, but shh!