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[sperrow]

they listen to the wrong face
and tell her desire
is too hot a flame
she says
"look at me burn"

Comments

[anonymous]

Oh I liiiiiike that!

It has a very strong point for only being 5 lines. It has a 'grab me' line at the end. I can see the image in my head and ... well, I 've always known you could put words together well :)

Kocho

*hugs*

[sperrow]

thank you, Kocho. i made it with a magnetic poetry set.