Ficlet for Delanach

[sphinxofthenile]

Title: Red Thread Of Redemption
Fandom: Captain America - TWS, The Avengers (MCU)
Pairing: Steve Rogers/Bucky Barnes
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I do not own them, they own me. No money made, no harm intended.
Summary: There were better days and there were the ones Steve would rather not remember, from anger and aggression to fear and confusion, but right

Comments

[elkica]

Somebody is ALIVE! :)

I found it really funny that I was just re-watching Captain America: The Winter Soldier yesterday, and I was oh and ah-ing over it.

I think you have captured Steve so well. He's a strong, always trying to do the right thing guy - how do American call that; straight-laced guy? A guy who would do give his life for his friends and what is right.

I edited my rambling about Bucky because I have read your fic from his point of view and, he's so perfect there, just the way that I see him. So perfect.

Great story, but how could it not be, when you are so good at writing emotions. :)

[sphinxofthenile]

We have times our oh and ah-ing quite well, it seems! That's quite a happy coincidence. That movie just got to me in ways I never expected. And every time I see it I find some new detail in it for my fangirl heart. ;)

Anyway, I'm really so glad that you enjoyed these little pieces. You have real good insight and you know so much about writing. So I'm always happy to hear your opinion, even when you give concrit, cause I can always learn from it.

And I do understand where you were coming from with Bucky, because I quite agree with you. It's just that Steve doesn't agree with me on that... Any time Bucky so much as breathes the wrong way my Steve goes into mother hen mode. Which he is really bad at, by the way. :D

But aside from that, I really love what Marvel did with Steve. He is an overly, outstandingly good guy, but he is still a person with his own problems and regrets and doubts, so he never gets annoying. Plus he has a nice sense of humour to boot.

And never get me started on Bucky. Ever.

[elkica]

The movie was really great. Since I liked the first movie, I thought that I'm going to like this one too, but I didn't expect that I would love it as much as I did.

You are too nice and you have too high opinion about my abilities. I feel as the more I learn about the writing as a craft and about humans nature the more I get aware how little I know.

Yeah, Marvel did a good job with the characters in The Winter solider, they are layered and the I love dynamic between them. Good characterization and dynamic relationships in the group or between the characters are what gets me all enchanted. That's the reason why I was really gaga over the TWS and that's why I'm a big fan of Games of Thrones, The Walking Dead and Falling Skies.