As Safe as Houses-2/2

[spiceblueeyes]

Title: As Safe as Houses
Rating: R
Summary: A new bad guy is in town and Xander gets taken.
Warnings: non-con, slavery
Disclaimer: I don't own this world, the characters belong to Joss and Mutant Enemy and others with way more money than me.
Word Count: 4,304
Author's note: I didn't include Anya, just cause.

Xander felt good. Actually, he

Comments

[whichclothes]

I'm glad Xander realized he has people who care about him. *pats him on the head*

[spiceblueeyes]

Yes, too bad he had to go through so much to realize it.

[mulder200]

Ah! That's so sweet!

[spiceblueeyes]

Thank you!

[windandsummer]

Wow what a hard way to learn such a needed lesson, I wonder how Xander going to manage dealing with all that was done to him now that hes back to himself. Nice read thanks for sharing!!~Bee

[spiceblueeyes]

It is a hard way indeed. Thanks for commenting!

[devo79]

This was good but I really feel the fight should have been more...I don't know just more... hmmmmm *tilts head and reads fic again*

[spiceblueeyes]

You're right, I went back and changed it a bit. Tell me what you think.

[devo79]

Doesn't feel so rushed now. Much better :)

[spiceblueeyes]

Yay! Thanks for the concrit.

[yanagi_wa]

Yes! Scoobies to the rescue, in more ways than one. I'm glad Xander realized that he is loved. Great work.

[spiceblueeyes]

Thank you so much! This was my first try doing a longer piece all at once, I was nervous about it.

[yanagi_wa]

I think you did very well. It was well organized, logical and had a good beginning, a solid middle, and a nice well rounded end.

Word count puts it at a good solid short story.

[spiceblueeyes]

Thanks! That's makes me glad you think so!