Breaking Point

[spiceblueeyes]

          It was going on to his second month in Africa when he found out the truth. A grieving parent finally opened up to him. Apparently, the natives had seen the suddenly powerful girls as a threat, and as soon as they’d been identified, they’d been hunted down and killed. No matter the age, girls as young as three had been taken from their

Comments

[sparrow2000]

You made me cry!

[spiceblueeyes]

*Hands you tissues*
Thanks for commenting!

[lit_gal]

Oh god. This hurt--probably because this is just such a possible future! Ow.

[spiceblueeyes]

Yeah, Xan went through a lot, and everyone has a breaking point, even our white knight.

[juliet316]

Oh wow. Sad part is I can see that so easily.

[spiceblueeyes]

Thank you!

[emilygoober]

gah! ow. throat hurts, but i have resisted straight out bawling. reading this was really wonderful though, it made me see a lot more dimensions of the crap that the scoobies and xan in particular have had to go through. really tragic though. you have such a great way with words and really poignant scenes. if you ever wrote a long fic i'd be an emotional, addicted wreck.

[spiceblueeyes]

The Scoobies really did go through a lot. I was pretty general, cause that's what effect I wanted, but if you get into episode specifics, man did they have it rough.

Thank you for the lovely compliment!

[lil_jei]

Holy crap. I am speechless. So undone I tell you.

[spiceblueeyes]

Thank you very much!