Comments | spiceblueeyes: Leave All Your Love And Your Longing Behind-Epilogue

spiceblueeyes

Leave All Your Love And Your Longing Behind-Epilogue

Jun 30, 2010 16:22

supernatural, dean/lisa, leave all your longing, big bang

Comments 46

labrat68 July 4 2010, 02:58:24 UTC

This was lovely! You did a very nice job of weaving in the canon with your story. I felt you stayed true to the characters and your dialog and descriptions were excellent. I really enjoyed reading this.

spiceblueeyes July 4 2010, 15:27:49 UTC

Thank you! I tried to stay as true to canon as I could.

anonymous July 5 2010, 00:30:42 UTC

I'm guilty of being a lurker who hardly ever leaves comments but this was just so amazing that I have to. I'm surprised to be one of the few to admit this brought some serious tears to my eyes. The characters are all spot on and it's just all so... Gah... *grabs kleenex*

Amazing job!

spiceblueeyes July 5 2010, 16:25:16 UTC

Thank you for the lovely comment, and double thank you for de-lurking to make it!

thecrunchie July 5 2010, 20:22:19 UTC

I LOVED this! I'm always trying to find AUs of TKAA that go exactly like this! Cuz this?? Is how I prayed things would go during that ep. I love Ben and I love Dean/Lisa and I love daddy!dean.

You ROCK!! Thank you!!

spiceblueeyes July 6 2010, 02:23:34 UTC

Thank you very much. I agree, Daddy!Dean is the cutest!

metallidean_grl July 6 2010, 05:39:36 UTC

I loved this story!!! I loved how you wove Lisa and Ben into Dean and Sam's lives. Dean and Ben are so cute together, I just wish I could have read Ben calling Dean 'Dad' at least once. If he did then I missed it. Enjoyed how Dean and Lisa didn't "get together" until closer until his ticket was due. Loved that Dean was respectful in that way. Everything about this was magic. Do you plan on continuing into Season 4, or is this it? Would love to read more in this verse.

spiceblueeyes July 7 2010, 04:36:23 UTC

Thank you so much! Ben not calling Dean 'Dad' was a choice I made because Ben was 8 already and Dean had been living with then for a while before he found out about Dean being his father. I felt like he probably wouldn't call him Dad. There's a timestamp in my head that may appear someday dealing with the issue.
As for a season 4, never say never, but I've no plans to continue now.
Thanks again!

hellodean September 8 2010, 09:23:06 UTC

I'd write more but I'm crying... this so should haved been the way it went...

spiceblueeyes September 8 2010, 19:38:29 UTC

I'm glad the story affected you and that you liked my version of season three :)