I'm glad you like the story, that makes me warm and fuzzy inside :D I like the new add-on ending too, I think it makes it better. Plus I edited out a bunch of unneeded stuff and tried to make it more concise. Dean always looks after Sam, that's his #1 priority. I usually write hurt!Dean, so writing a story about Sam was a bit different for me. I like how it came out though :)
Wow - SOOOO creepy! I just loved how you kept them in character - Dean all worried about the phone, Sam so desperate and yet helpless in a way - GREAT, really, really great!
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I like the new add-on ending too, I think it makes it better. Plus I edited out a bunch of unneeded stuff and tried to make it more concise.
Dean always looks after Sam, that's his #1 priority. I usually write hurt!Dean, so writing a story about Sam was a bit different for me. I like how it came out though :)
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I just loved how you kept them in character - Dean all worried about the phone, Sam so desperate and yet helpless in a way - GREAT, really, really great!
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