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spicyasparagus

Epsilon Part IIb: Yamada

Sep 11, 2009 13:18

#16 - Need

He had many disagreements with his father, but none were as frequent as the arguments regarding his hair length. The elder man thought it was barbaric for a male member of the family to have such long hair; it was completely unbecoming and was as if the family could not afford to have their sons’ hair cut on a regular basis.

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writing, yamada, epsilon: yamada, t.s.d.

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jay_ay90 September 12 2009, 13:31:58 UTC

I LOVE YOU. LIKE, REALLY. TwT ( ... )

spicyasparagus September 12 2009, 13:44:22 UTC

Yellow bellow! XD

Aw, thanks! I really appreciate the super long comment you gave, and all your feedback. X3 X3

I'm so glad you liked 'Vision'. Tried not to make it too sappy/overdone, but I wanted some emotion to come through as well - it's a tricky balance. So yeah. =]

Sharp girl - you know, I had a better version of 'Attention's first line at first, but I didn't want to repeat myself with 'after', 'cause the original was something like 'after returning home from his friend's place...'. Just ran through that prompt, didn't really take so much pains with it as the rest. XD

Awesome. Was worried about 'Soul', glad you liked it! Oh really? Maybe. I have no plans for Shouji as yet, but since you mentioned him... ^-~

YES, 'Picture''s sentences! But major facepalm at the multiple takes of purikura - you can tell I've never done one before, yes? XD (no comment about the sweetcheeks, moohaha.)

Again, thanks for reviewing!

Re. P/S: Going to check it out, baybeh. 8D

jay_ay90 September 12 2009, 14:36:43 UTC

Haha, it's a first, aye? I realised my previous comments mostly consisted of "kyaaaaa omg i lap lap lap yewwwww etc etc etc". And so I thought I should write something less shallow and fangirl-ish than that, though I still succeed at the squeeing fangirl-ness. XD ( ... )

spicyasparagus September 13 2009, 10:30:30 UTC

To be honest, I actually didn't realise it at first - comments are comments after all! But since you mentioned it...yes, I think this time round's a bit more detailed, which I adore. Nothing's better than a good, descriptive, level-headed opinion from a friend. So thanks for the time and effort again! =]

(you're my number one fangirl, keep it up plspls! *hopeful eyes* XD)

*breathes another sigh of relief* I can't tell you how glad I am for that...just a little background though - you know that in Japan, the eldest son's the one who conducts funerals in the immediate family when the father dies? So for Yamada not to show up is a bigger deal than it would be in other countries. Perhaps it's a bit OOC, like the 'purikura' thing (ARGH!!!! >< >< >< ), but I can't see him being able to attend the funeral, considering the history he had with his father...anyway, an 'FYI' moment for 'ya. Confession time over. XD ( ... )

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