More foliage and silly semi-slashy thing

Nov 20, 2007 16:36


Well, first, the fic. It's a short one, just a stupid little plot bunny that bit me. All I can see is that I've gotten out of practice writing, and the ending just fizzles, but here it is for what it's worth.

Title: An Afternoon Visit
Rating: PG-R, depending on your imagination
Disclaimer: don't owns 'em, just plays with 'em.

“Inspector Lestrade!” Mrs ( Read more... )

foliage, slash, humor

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sherlock2040 November 20 2007, 23:51:10 UTC
Teeeheeee!!! That's just like Holmes!!! Fantastic :) :)

Oh and I love your leaves :D

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spikejem November 22 2007, 18:17:54 UTC
Aren't the leaves charming? Glad folks like good foliage!

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daylyn November 21 2007, 01:30:24 UTC
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh Holmes, don't EVER stop. Same to you, Spike, btw. Please, don't ever stop. And definitely welcome back!

That was brilliant. I loved Mrs. Hudson especially, and the fact that H/W were going to enact some of the "techniques" they were acting out. And the fact that Mrs. Hudson starts to calmly explain those educational "Indian rigns" was brilliant.

Loved this!

Oh, and pretty, pretty leaves. Autumn is one of the things I miss most about the East Coast.

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spikejem November 22 2007, 18:19:32 UTC
Thanks! Mrs. Hudson just took the scene and ran away with it.

I do love our place, but now all those pretty leaves are gone and it's November. Augh.

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derien November 21 2007, 01:58:49 UTC
Oh, man, they are EVIL!

Your trees are lovely, though! We often do foliage well in Maine, but this year we had some odd weather and it damped the colors. Pretty much over now, I think.

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spikejem November 22 2007, 18:21:44 UTC
Oh, it's totally over here, too, and has been for weeks. In fact, I'd taken those pictures planning to share them here, but never got 'round to it, 'coz it was right during my month away from net.

Those same spectacular trees are now completely bare, and we just had our first snowfall in the Champlain Valley the day before yesterday.

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lawnnun November 21 2007, 02:48:58 UTC
Poor Lestrade. What they don't realize is that he's going to go home and jerk it 'til it hurts.

I love Mrs. Hudson, and I fucking adore the casually evil way that Watson's helping out. XD

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spikejem November 22 2007, 18:24:15 UTC
You're right, of course -- I was rather hard on him. And the original plot bunny called for him and Mrs. Hudson to have hot sex while waiting for Sherlock and John to finish up.

But then I realized they weren't fucking, they were just fucking with Lestrade.

But I probably owe Lestrade a good scrog, eh?

Oh -- and I've looked at it and looked at it and I can't figure it out. What the heck is that icon? is it a face or what?

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bone_lady November 21 2007, 05:11:17 UTC
*dies of laughter* That Mrs. Hudson...she's clever! That was great!

Lovely foliage too! It gets like that here in Indiana too...

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spikejem November 22 2007, 18:26:55 UTC
no! don't die! *gets out medical equipment*

Glad you like the foliage; I'm just a sucker for pretty nature shots.

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