Bangkok Butterfly Chapter 7

[spikesfool]

The end is nearing. I never meant for this to be so long. I was only going to do a few parts because I didn't feel confident enough to try a full-fledged multi-chapter story after my posting crash. Having three WIPs now is freaking me out. So BB will be closing up shop soon

Comments

[missus_grace]

Woot! They got away, for now, at least :)

What the heck did Angel see in the river? And will it really get them? Can't wait for more of this!

And it seems to be the perfect-sized story. I like long, drawn out stories that are complete and can be read all together, but for this type of action-adventure, WIP fiction I think a speedy resolution is in order.

[spikesfool]

A few chapters back, Angel talked about his adventures in country and once seeing the fireballs that the Naga is suppose to throw at trespassers invading Buddha's peace.

It's a real legend of Southeast Asia, and the fireballs are documented. After a little more research, I discovered that Nagas can be shapeshifters, who have a poisonous bite and can squeeze people to death in their coils. Scary, huh? Spike's a little nervous about his coming swim. :)

I agree about the story length. Only another chapter or two to wind things up. Thank you for hanging in there!!

[angelsiredspike]

Amazing chapter!It's all good.

[spikesfool]

Hugs, babe, and thank you!!

[spikesfool]

Those boys can argue up a storm, but when one of them is in danger, they'll never stop until both of them are safe. I'm so happy you liked the chapter. I wasn't sure about it at all. My mood always affects my opinion.

*squeezes you tight*

[acacia5]

That was a fabulous chapter honey, I am enjoying this fic soooo much.

Your description of the fight scene was soooo good. Chilling and brutal, and bought home the fact that they were fighting for their lives.

Then there was the description of Spike's memories of them making love, soooo beautiful and sexy.

I loved the little caveman bit too, priceless.

[spikesfool]

This chapter didn't come easily, so your comments make me feel really good that I didn't totally mess up.

I wanted the contrast of the brutality with the sweet love making. Neither one of the boys are quite ready to admit that what's between them is love, but I think they're fighting a losing battle.

Thank you, sweetie, for always being there and making me feel like I've written something worthwhile. *large, squishy hugs*

[vampyrehunterm]

Oh sweetie, that was an exciting chapter. Beautifully and brilliantly written.
I was telling my hubby about your writing. I agree with him, the people who brag about how great they are usually aren't that good in reality, and the people who don't think that they are very good writers are usually brilliant.
You're a great writer, much better than some of the so-called big name writers who have bunches of books out. I always enjoy reading your work.

[spikesfool]

You made me blush! I know we're always our own worst critics, but there are some outstanding authors out there.

I'm content to carry the bride's train, as long as there are a few wonderful people, like you, to keep me going when I'm feeling low.

If I haven't thanked you profusely for your kind support before, consider it done now. Thank you, girl. You're the best!