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spikesfool

Spike City Chapter 6

Aug 12, 2008 11:14

Another chapter of Spike City. I was meant to be finishing BB, but I couldn't wait to show off the present the terrifically talented zoesmith gave me. An amazing, dramatic banner for Spike City. I can't express how much I appreciate all the wonderful manips I've received for this and other fics I've written. It makes me feel truly blessed to have so many ( Read more... )

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vampyrehunterm August 12 2008, 20:35:26 UTC

Hmm, Spike has it all planned out, how he's going to off Angel. But do we really believe he's going to follow through? :)
This story is coming along nicely. I like the way you're building up to things. At this point, it could go either way. And the banner goes well with it too.

spikesfool August 20 2008, 00:42:00 UTC

Isn't the banner just lovely!!! I was so surprised and thrilled when I saw it.

I'm easy peasy that way. A pretty inspires me for weeks. That's how this story started in the first place.

Spike's plans have always gone well for him before, being so cold and meticulous. But Angel's about to throw a wrench into the works. Almost nothing will go as planned as far as he's concerned. It's about time the bad boy got shocked out of his icy little world.

greenstone_j August 12 2008, 20:58:18 UTC

Hee... come in to my parlour said the spider to the fly....*puzzles* and which one is the spider and which one is the fly? Great internal monologue about the movies *grin* and the subtle seduction *rubs hands together*

spikesfool August 20 2008, 00:37:55 UTC

You've got it, darling. The spider and the fly are going to be circling each in smaller and smaller circles. Both sure that they are the predator.

Should be lots of fun in the next chapter!

I'm so glad you liked the internal monologues. Those are fun to do!!

missus_grace August 12 2008, 21:48:45 UTC

Your descriptions of Spike's anger are so vivid! Spike convelescing at Angel's place could be fodder for several good chapters :)

spikesfool August 20 2008, 00:32:14 UTC

You know me so well. The boys are going to be bumping into each other in that tiny apartment of Angel's. Especially once Spike gets back on his feet a bit! Should be lots of fun. Heeeeee.

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spikesfool August 20 2008, 00:30:41 UTC

Maybe he deserves to be squashed for being so sure of himself. He's not going to take it easily when he realizes his heart is involved. That's will be a kick to write.

Thank you, honey bunny. You're a champ!!!!

kindredspirit75 August 13 2008, 01:26:16 UTC

Methinks Spike's overconfidence at having Angel right where he wants him is going to throw a wrench into the works.

How do you get up the nerve to off someone you're falling in love with?

spikesfool August 20 2008, 00:28:12 UTC

Spike is starting to squirm a little bit. He knows he's sexually attracted to the big prat, but he'd be the first one to deny he's falling in love.

They haven't even kissed yet! But already, he's trying to think of ways to save him. Spike's in for a world of trouble on this one.