Spike City Chapter 7

[spikesfool]

I wasn't going to post any more of this story for awhile because the feedback has been so low for yonks that it plain discourages me. I haven't even answered the lovely few who've said sweet things on the last chapter, though I promise I will. It's just that when I get very down like this, it's hard to be cheerful and answer

Comments

[missus_grace]

How much do I love that Spike watered the droopy plant!

Yeah, Spike, keep talking about doing in Angel. It'll never happen, although I suspect there might be some doing of Angel. God, yes, please. As soon as he's healed, maybe?
*bats eyelashes*

[spikesfool]

You're irresistible.

I kind of liked the plant bit myself. Spike's roots need a good soaking. :D

He wants to kill somebody, though he's not so happy any more with the idea of shooting Angel. Maybe he'll think of another way to "knock him off." That might be more, shall we say, interesting?

Thank you for the comment, sweets.

[kindredspirit75]

Oh, I love the little cat and mouse game these two are playing. They both want to shag each other so badly that the sexual tension just drips off the page.

Thanks for the update, darling. Looking forward to more.

[spikesfool]

Ahhh, I love that you're liking the UST. They're dripping with lust, but not quite able to take the next step. Somehow, I think Spike will think of a way around that. That devious brain is very busy.

Thank you for the comment, sweetheart. You're a champ.

[spikesfool]

I love writing details. But sometimes, I think I'd have more readers if I cut down to a bare bones style. Straight narrative with no frills. *sigh* But every time I try, it doesn't feel right. I'm glad there's two of us.

Druggy Spike was fun to write. He'd better lay off the dope if he knows what's good for him. Imagining Angel was as martyr gave me the giggles.

Barely able to move Spike is slowing down the shagging, but I'm sure he'll...come up with something. (BAD PUN, BADPUN)

Thank you, darling. *loves you madly*

[shiny_n_new]

Interesting to see that Spike's already thinking of ways to save Angel, even if he hasn't quite acknowledged it. Also, I hope that plant flourishes under Spik's tender loving care ;)

[spikesfool]

Spike thinks Angel is too pretty to kill. Now he's gotten a whiff, he wants to shag him rotten. It's only a matter of time until he figures out how to do it with broken ribs and a concussion. ;D

Spike's softy side is starting to show. He sure doesn't want that plant to die.

Thanks, lovely, for commenting. *hugs*

[angelsiredspike]

You are an amazing writer! I love this chapter!

[spikesfool]

Well, I've loved you for years, so that makes us even. Thank you, sweets.