Spike City Chapter 11

Sep 09, 2008 13:20

A short, but pivotal chapter. I'll try to make up for it next time. My muse and I have been arguing and I'm losing.

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blondebitz September 9 2008, 22:09:31 UTC
Fabulous my darling!

Spike is completely phased by the tenderness from Angel. His living by his wits instincts go into overdrive...and the hard cold assassin comes to the fore!

“Okay. That all sounds fairly plausible. Now tell me why you said you were one of the bad guys.”
oooops! Looks like Spike's dropped himself right in it now!

Looks like this conversation's gonna get ugly! Excellent chapter as always my darling.

I'm keeping my fingers crossed for a sweet, tender and happy outcome for our darling boys. I trust you my darling! :)

*sweet and tender kisses for you my darling...and the boys.* xxxxxx

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lexa4227 September 9 2008, 22:15:55 UTC
This is getting REALLY interesting. *g* Looking forward to what Spike's answer is to Angel's question.

Barb

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greenstone_j September 9 2008, 22:23:12 UTC
See, I got to the last line and said out loud "oh, crap". Beautiful how you pulled me right in... although p0rny me was going, "just have sex, then you won't have to worry about putting your foot in it... something else will be there instead..." *evil smirk*

*hands you gloves to beat up your muse* unless you wanted the knuckle dusters...

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acacia5 September 9 2008, 23:42:37 UTC
That was a riveting chapter. Loved the way you built up the tension between them. I think Spike is about to realise that he has underestimated Angel, that being kind is not the same as being stupid. As usual you have me desperate for more.

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shiny_n_new September 10 2008, 02:11:36 UTC
I didn't even see ch.10 was up! It's like a double present!

Also, Angel's starting to piece it together. Spike's going to be in trouble...

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