Spike City Chapter 1

[spikesfool]

Because this is very new, I'm going to post the first chapter already. It's short, but I wanted to establish the main character, fill him out a little, before I have to go back to work tomorrow and lose most of my writing time for the next three days. Hopefully, the chapters will get longer as the story progresses

Comments

[vampyrehunterm]

This story has a film noir feel to it. You're doing a wonderful job of painting a picture of the world that Spike lives in. I'm very intrigued by it.

[spikesfool]

Thank you, love. That's exactly what I'm going for. Film Noir.

It's harder to write than I thought it would be. I started this chapter three different ways before I came up with this. Very happy you're intrigued!

[adso_von_melk]

Wonderful. Spike is such a player! very hot.
I love how you describe the set in wich Spike moves, very film noir! Its delicious! ;)

*hugs you hard!* *cuddles with your muse* ;)

[spikesfool]

*grin*

Spike is all kinds of a player. But something's about to shake up his cool little world.

I'm bouncing because you think I'm hitting the film noir button in the right way! It's not easy for me. I thought it would be, but it's not at all. So squeeeee

*hugs you back a lot*

[woman_of_]

*hugs* great chapter, he is such a rush of emotions, changing from on to the other in record time. Very dark and seedy world. Pefect for the banner

*kisses*

[spikesfool]

Very dark and seedy world.

Oh, I love, love that comment. You've made me very happy!!! I couldn't think of better fb for a noir story than that.

*brings you flowers*

[lynnenne]

the one that wasn’t a smile at all, but shark teeth aimed Spike's way.

Nice description. Very chilling.

[spikesfool]

Thank you. I really appreciate it.

[spikesfool]

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Cue music! The End!

Ooops. Not yet. But I'm sure glad you're clapping and not booing!

*jumps with you*