Spirit House Chapter 3

Jul 25, 2008 08:34

I'm very happy to be continuting the story of Spirit House. Here is the brand new chapter. Now I'm off to answer comments. Thank you for those sticking with me. I heart you a lot!!!!

This chapter is dedicated to the wonderful mwrgana for the great new manip she's made for SH. (Hope you're all right, darling! I'm thinking about you ( Read more... )

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a_mistletoe July 25 2008, 17:36:42 UTC
Nice manip and I'm loving the story too. These out of time type stories are always so spooky in that you never know where reality begins and ends or even what it is. I'm glad you got passed the roadblock because this reeks of promise. More soon?

Oh and something I noticed in the other chapters too: The one of the medieval solider is bloody amazing. But...” It should be 'soldier'

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spikesfool July 25 2008, 17:54:43 UTC
Whoa. Thank you for catching my error. I hate when I do that.

Yay for reeking. And the promise. LOL That makes me so happy. I'm going to start on the next part as soon as I do another Spike City. I feel like a juggler at the circus!

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a_mistletoe July 25 2008, 18:40:07 UTC
Yay! O fickle muse keep those sparks going.

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spikesfool July 27 2008, 17:52:03 UTC
Hee. I've got her tied up in the closet so she can't get away.

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vampyrehunterm July 25 2008, 20:14:42 UTC
Very nice. Has some of the classic elements of star-crossed lovers being separated by jealousy and evil. Am liking it very much. :)

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spikesfool July 27 2008, 17:53:07 UTC
Oh exactly! Star-crossed lovers trying to find each other again. I'm so happy you're liking it!

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acacia5 July 25 2008, 23:17:12 UTC
Now we know who the villain is, but what can Liam do about him to save Will?
I am loving this. It is so romantic the way they are soul mates separated by time. I just don't know how they can be together though. *is very worried*

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spikesfool July 27 2008, 17:57:06 UTC
*the villain takes center stage for a bow*

I've always loved time travel, romantic, star-crossed lovers stories. This is my shot at them. My writer's block was because I'd complicated everything way to much in my head. Now that I've simplified, it's going smoother.

Thank you, love for commenting. (And for giving me the hint about danna's birthday!)

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missus_grace July 26 2008, 04:13:19 UTC
I like Liam's thoughts.

The light dimmed and died while Liam plotted various mad schemes to reduce Francis, Earl of Marne to a thing of bone and gristle, each scenario more outlandish and violent than the next.

I hope he finds a way to make break Will free also!

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spikesfool July 27 2008, 17:58:47 UTC
Liam wants to chop Francis into little pieces for what he's done to Will, and the way he's keeping them apart.

*hugs you tight* Thank you for the fb. It keeps me working hard.

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jans_intentions July 26 2008, 05:40:10 UTC
Lovely work, sweet!

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spikesfool July 27 2008, 17:59:08 UTC
Thank you so much, darling!

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