Oh man, this one Im very very happy with. I like this alot.

[spikespeigel72]

This is definitely on my list of best worded works. I thought I was nearer to 70, but this makes my 66th lyrical poem.

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[alskardig]

Kudos. Much kudos.

[butterducky]

Agreed. You definitely deserve some cookie points, which = hugs in my world.

[crayola_eyes]

And if you hold on tight
To what you think is your thing
You may find you're missing all the rest
She ran up into the light surprised
Her arms are open
Her mind's eye is...

Seeing things from a
Better side than most can dream
On a better road I feel
So you could say she's safe
Whatever tears at her
Whatever holds her down
And if nothing can be done
She'll make the best of what's around