After it was announced that they had just gotten their big break, the Duke was signing for their play, all of the Children of the Revolution grabbed whatever alcohol they possessed and went up to the roof. The party was loud and kind of obnoxious after an hour of it, so Hankyung hurriedly went to his room. He told himself he was going
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♥the Hanchul-scene though... but I feel angst coming >_< ...
P.s. don't worry you'll not lose me as a reader, am still hooked! Fighting!
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I will definately update sooner this time *sighs* I suck lol.
Yes, I know money usually blinds us to the important things in life. I hated making Kangin seem like all he wanted was money...and Heechul's like a weird daughter-son hybrid to him =/
I'm so glad you liked it, but yeah..there'll be angst.
=/
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I was thinking and I think his coldness would pull it off...
but his body style isn't something that would strike fear in the hearts of children..
lol
So what do you think?
Aw good, Heechul is the most difficult person to write. Damn him lol. j/k
I love him.
*hugs* I know Siwon is a semi-fave of yours I hope you don't mind me turning him into a villian (now I picture him in the black cape with his arm up to his face cackling! lol!)
Love ya!
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oh siwon. XD lol!
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And I must say that the paragraphs at the beining from Hankyung were really moving and I really got what you were talking about. It was really beautiful, honestely.
The song choice was WONDERFUL and bonus points for adding the actual song to the chapter! (you must teach me in RL how to do this haha).
I Love you and this story. AND I'M EPICALLY SORRY FOR NOT READING SOONER!!!!! *hugs*
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You made up for it in this comment.
I should probably put up a pic of what Kyuhyun looks like for you..well in my minds eye at least. lol.
It's actually easy to put imeem stuff in there.
I'll show you. =)
I tried to put a lot of details.
I really wanted people to feel all the emotions because this really was an important chapter.
In movies it's simple because you can see the people's pain/happiness/anger w/e.
In writing you have to make people feel it.
I'm so so glad you liked it.
Like I told you, more will be up soon!
I'm working on it tomorrow =)
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Heechul slowly lifted his eyes to Hankyung. This boy was going to be the death of him. He desperately wanted to scream yes, but instead he took the easy way out.-----> he wanted to scream YES....gaaaaaaaaah WHO WOULDN'T WANT TO SCREAM YES at Hankyung???
CAN I SCREAM YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES TOO???????
It felt like the whole world had lit up as Heechul finally looked into Hankyung’s eyes and saw the pure and innocent sparkle in them.---> I agree....Hankyung really had this SAN INNOCENT SPARKLE in his eyes!!!!
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH UR REALLY MAKING ME FALL IN LOVE WITH HANNIE A MILLION TIMES MORE!!!!
i like the way you wrote this fic...you didn't use the songs word by word but you captured the essence of each scene...beautifully... I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!! *hugs*
sorry for spamming ur page....but but...IM REALLY A HARDCORE MOULIN ROUGE AND SUJU FAN that's why... XDDDD
i know and i sing all the songs by heart...im that crazy XDDDD
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This comment made my day like a million times!
Keep spamming my page please *jumps up and down* I love your comments!
Yes who wouldn't say yes to Hannie? Really...he wouldn't have to ask anything and I'd just say "Yes...a million times over..yes.." lol
XD
I love Moulin Rouge too, I sing the songs in the mirror all the time. haha.
So see? You're not crazy!
Or...maybe it's just we're both crazy...
Either way, I'm totally with you on it! haha.
I'm so so happy you love this fic!! *dances*
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in honor of your fic...i named the playlist WE CAN BE HEROES lalalalalalalalalallalalalalaal
nyahahahahahahhahahahaha XDDDDD
btw...i hope you don't mind...can i know your name??? hee hee
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That is so flipping awsome!
I'm so happy you liked the playlist, I was actually planning to do a post (after this fic is over) with the "Soundtrack" to it, and post links up for the DLs and such.
=)
I just hope I'm that suave with the computer/photoshop skills to make pretty covers and such.
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