We Can Be Heroes...

Mar 27, 2009 21:15

            After it was announced that they had just gotten their big break, the Duke was signing for their play, all of the Children of the Revolution grabbed whatever alcohol they possessed and went up to the roof. The party was loud and kind of obnoxious after an hour of it, so Hankyung hurriedly went to his room. He told himself he was going ( Read more... )

fanfic, super junior

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followurdestiny March 28 2009, 11:54:29 UTC
spot!

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followurdestiny March 28 2009, 12:39:30 UTC
Ugh...why does money make people blind also... cloud their minds and make them do things that are not going to be good...>_<

♥the Hanchul-scene though... but I feel angst coming >_< ...

P.s. don't worry you'll not lose me as a reader, am still hooked! Fighting!

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spikesvampbaby March 28 2009, 18:02:25 UTC
awww thanks hun and YAY for the spot haha.
I will definately update sooner this time *sighs* I suck lol.

Yes, I know money usually blinds us to the important things in life. I hated making Kangin seem like all he wanted was money...and Heechul's like a weird daughter-son hybrid to him =/

I'm so glad you liked it, but yeah..there'll be angst.
=/

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dark_hunterjenn March 29 2009, 00:22:03 UTC
Ahhh, glad you updated sweetie! Very nice work, have I told you how very much I love your Heechul? Just the right amount of snark and heart, makes me want to smoosh him. You really seem to be pulling off a very oily Siwon, I was not sure at first but it fits well!

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spikesvampbaby March 29 2009, 02:30:35 UTC
Ok do you think Kyuhyun being the bodyguard is stupid?
I was thinking and I think his coldness would pull it off...
but his body style isn't something that would strike fear in the hearts of children..
lol

So what do you think?

Aw good, Heechul is the most difficult person to write. Damn him lol. j/k
I love him.

*hugs* I know Siwon is a semi-fave of yours I hope you don't mind me turning him into a villian (now I picture him in the black cape with his arm up to his face cackling! lol!)

Love ya!

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dark_hunterjenn March 29 2009, 02:38:04 UTC
No Kyu is good, he makes people cower with his glare,lol. Siwon in a cape, that osm, lol!

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spikesvampbaby March 29 2009, 19:59:40 UTC
ok good XD
oh siwon. XD lol!

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slash_scion April 7 2009, 04:08:57 UTC
I am SOOO mad at myself for not reading this chapter sooner! Really! This chapter is actually probably one of my favoritest things you're ever written so far. The detail is amazing.

And I must say that the paragraphs at the beining from Hankyung were really moving and I really got what you were talking about. It was really beautiful, honestely.

The song choice was WONDERFUL and bonus points for adding the actual song to the chapter! (you must teach me in RL how to do this haha).

I Love you and this story. AND I'M EPICALLY SORRY FOR NOT READING SOONER!!!!! *hugs*

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spikesvampbaby April 7 2009, 18:18:23 UTC
awww *hugs* i'm not mad at you at all.
You made up for it in this comment.
I should probably put up a pic of what Kyuhyun looks like for you..well in my minds eye at least. lol.
It's actually easy to put imeem stuff in there.
I'll show you. =)

I tried to put a lot of details.
I really wanted people to feel all the emotions because this really was an important chapter.
In movies it's simple because you can see the people's pain/happiness/anger w/e.
In writing you have to make people feel it.

I'm so so glad you liked it.
Like I told you, more will be up soon!
I'm working on it tomorrow =)

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leunah23 May 19 2009, 12:20:09 UTC
what??? epic fail??? gosh THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FICS I'VE EVER READ!!!!!

Heechul slowly lifted his eyes to Hankyung. This boy was going to be the death of him. He desperately wanted to scream yes, but instead he took the easy way out.-----> he wanted to scream YES....gaaaaaaaaah WHO WOULDN'T WANT TO SCREAM YES at Hankyung???
CAN I SCREAM YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES TOO???????

It felt like the whole world had lit up as Heechul finally looked into Hankyung’s eyes and saw the pure and innocent sparkle in them.---> I agree....Hankyung really had this SAN INNOCENT SPARKLE in his eyes!!!!

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH UR REALLY MAKING ME FALL IN LOVE WITH HANNIE A MILLION TIMES MORE!!!!
i like the way you wrote this fic...you didn't use the songs word by word but you captured the essence of each scene...beautifully... I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!! *hugs*
sorry for spamming ur page....but but...IM REALLY A HARDCORE MOULIN ROUGE AND SUJU FAN that's why... XDDDD
i know and i sing all the songs by heart...im that crazy XDDDD

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spikesvampbaby May 19 2009, 17:09:20 UTC
*blushes* Omg thank you so much you're so sweet!
This comment made my day like a million times!

Keep spamming my page please *jumps up and down* I love your comments!

Yes who wouldn't say yes to Hannie? Really...he wouldn't have to ask anything and I'd just say "Yes...a million times over..yes.." lol

XD

I love Moulin Rouge too, I sing the songs in the mirror all the time. haha.
So see? You're not crazy!
Or...maybe it's just we're both crazy...
Either way, I'm totally with you on it! haha.

I'm so so happy you love this fic!! *dances*

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leunah23 May 20 2009, 13:20:17 UTC
and im Loving ALL THE SONGS TOO!!!!! gaaahhhh thanks for giving me a new playlist in my IPOD
in honor of your fic...i named the playlist WE CAN BE HEROES lalalalalalalalalallalalalalaal
nyahahahahahahhahahahaha XDDDDD
btw...i hope you don't mind...can i know your name??? hee hee

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spikesvampbaby May 20 2009, 17:06:29 UTC
hehe!
That is so flipping awsome!
I'm so happy you liked the playlist, I was actually planning to do a post (after this fic is over) with the "Soundtrack" to it, and post links up for the DLs and such.

=)

I just hope I'm that suave with the computer/photoshop skills to make pretty covers and such.

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