RenIchi - Top Of The World (1/4)

[spikykun]

Title: On Top of the World (You Get Nothing Done) Or: Boom Boom Sexy Time
Pairings: Renji/Ichigo, mentions of UlquiHime, past IchiIshi, one-sided RenRuki and a tiny bit of RenShuu.
AU: In which Ichigo is besties with Orihime, has had some serious shit happen to him, takes life Really Seriously, and is a baker. Renji has sunglasses and fame, and likes

Comments

[spikykun]

You wouldn't believe how frustrating it was to post, oh my god. I kept getting Post Too Large Why Do You Write So Much Spiky errors T_T
:D ♥

[writerx75]

Damnit, Spiky, here I was, all determined to get a million chapters written yesterday and you had to go and post this. OK, well, so I did finish the chapter I was working on, so now I can come back and comment. XD

I love that we get to hear from both of the guys in this chapter, and that you hit us up almost right away with some yummy smexy times. So delicious how they go from arguing to making out, like it was all just foreplay anyway. It was so much fun how that back and forth dynamic continued throughout their encounter, like each one of them kept trying to outdo the other. It just seemed so them, really, and so hot. Speaking of hot, I fucking loved Ichigo warming up Renji's hands, and then what Renji did with those big hands to get the both of them off...and nearly getting caught...thanks for the big case of nosebleed. XD

I really love the way you give little hints about both of their pasts and I definitely ended this part wanting to know more. Oh, and the fact that Rukia sent him to that bakery in particular made me

[spikykun]

LOL, sorry for distracting you!

OK, you have no idea what a relief it is to hear the sex scene was good. I've been really low on porn lately, so I wasn't really inspired to write it. Then it was THERE and yeah. *glad* <3

Thank you for reading! :D

[spikykun]

SUBGLASSESSSSSS ♥

I can't believe you've read it all again. Thank yooou, you know I worked on those little details *pleased*

[chorus_of_chaos]

aaaaand that's getting added to my text collection, hopefully you'll be writing more of it in the future so I can keep my"
oh my god I'm away from the internet and no good porn "to read moments expanding..

[spikykun]

You flatter me so! XD