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[spillogical]

I recorded the poem from the previous post with its corresponding dubstep track.You can listen to it in the handy dandy little player below. I am quite proud of it. I will re-post the lyrics below the player.



In Defense Of Dubstep

Imagine

Bruce Lee's clenched fist

one inch from contact

Zen in its tension, a

blissful rattlesnake

Coiled

beneath this

study in

Comments

sounds great! :-D

[only1miouo]

One thing though... in print you have "This liquid moment" but in audio you say "movement"... I personally prefer the word "moment" there... as though time was somehow pooled and washing and possibly even dangling in air like that water hologram in the movie Abyss... sound made into time made into a clear liquid Bruce Lee fist... that is what I see with "moment"...

not that "movement" isn't a great word there too, just that I loved what I read in moment so much that movement threw me off for a second. Movement in the drop makes me think of the scene in The Matrix where Neo is leaning back to dodge bullets. A cool thought but not quite as rich as the original one for me.

The words are great and even better with the audio! :-)