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[spilttobil]

We shake like two leaves in a breeze
On a tree with no sleeves
Raise our hands for a plan that pleases
But so often we freeze

Comments

[elenasaurs]

Your comment was a perfect sort of preface. Funny how some words are so striking that they demand a feeling or more writing or anything really. It makes me glad to be an English major.

Regardless, I paused my music to read it again. I really do enjoy the little I've seen of your writing.

[scoskets]

I really like this a lot.

[spilttobil]

Thanks Ross. You can give props to Elena for high quality "shake" usage.