Swerve

[mawaru_berry]

Pairing: Henry/Donghae
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Donghae likes to spin circles around you while you to catch your breath and remember that the sky hangs above and always will.
Word count: 1,320

A/N: would a warning be necessary if they're step-brothers? If so, warning: they're step-brothers. I haven't written fic in a while but I have been writing for my

Comments

[unactivist]

what the fuck. i love this. how did you manage to pull of this pov. what the fuck, what the fuck. i love you. and this henry, this henry is tragic, tragically perfect. just- fuck. ♥

[mawaru_berry]

how are you so fast. I love you. I love tragic Henry…and every kind of Henry. I'VE BEEN WRITING/READING A FANTASTIC SHITLOAD FOR ENGLISH. so I've actually sort of improved my creative writing with school, really :o as weird as it sounds.

[unactivist]

freaking ninja, yo. i love you too! :D ♥ and Henry! THAT IS SO AWESOME. /JEALOUS. that's actually pretty cool. english made me dumber in high school. :|

[mawaru_berry]

this is true. YAY ♥ Henry needs more love. a friend and I stumbled over a picture of him sitting out while the other boys were on stage, and he looked so :||| that we were like KAJFHGKAJDFG WHAT. hehe, AP English is hard but fun! …English made you dumber? D:

BRB WASHING MY HAIR. text me later if you leave LJ~

[shihan_ai]

WHATTHE FUCK WHY AM I SO LATE EVEN THOUGH YOU TOLD ME DKSJGLSDJ RAGE

[mawaru_berry]

YOU ARE NOT LATE YOU ARE THE SECOND PERSON TO READ THIS, SILLY ♥

[shihan_ai]

I AM YOU TOLD ME AND I WAS STILL A FAIL NINJA OMG /FLOPS

and lol i realized we both started our comments with what the fuck XD

[mawaru_berry]

THAT'S OKAY, IT'S NOT LIKE I'VE BEEN MY NINJA SELF LATELY ANYWAY

haha ♥

[13fireflies]

THIS IS MA SPOT AND I SHALL BE BACK. Whenever i finish that mindmap. OTZ

[shihan_ai]

:DDDDD YOU /smushes

[13fireflies]

Keke~ /cuddles ♥

[13fireflies]

OKAY FORGET THE MINDMAP I READ IT ALREADY.
I'VE MISSED YOU AND YOUR ABSOLUTELY AMAZING WRITING. Which seems to get better with every fic you write ♥♥♥

I see what you mean by your style has changed.
I love how simple everything is, how short the sentences are, yet they mean much more than that and as usual your descriptions of the tiniest details lkasjgklsjgklasjdgklsjgasklgj it drives me crazy. in a good way, of course. :D

omg the endingggg, Henry bb is so precious and Donghaeee, i just want to squeeze him into a hug. :3

klajgajakldjglasdjklsdjgldal okay nooowww i'll get back to my mindmap. /sobs

♥♥♥

[jooniee]

You are such perfection that I can't handle it.
This was the most gorgeous thing in the world. The second person in it completely broke me in half. It was me and him all at once, messed into this terrible longing that neither of knew how to feel.
The way that you manipulated my feelings with his is so genius and never done well. But you, my dear, seem to do everything so well, every sentence breaks and falls and bounces back in place with such precision.
If only more people knew how to manipulate words the way you do. If only, if only.

[mawaru_berry]

Oh, bb, you are too kind; I am not perfect! I don't believe in real perfection, at least. Idk. I have weird theories.

I love second person-I've wanted to use it more often, actually, but if I just kept going with it, it'd get repetitive, haha. I love you and your comment, dear, thank you so much ♥

[jooniee]

You are the closest thing to it I have ever known.

I guess, but you do it so well that I doubt that. It was nothing and I love you, too.

[thundersquall]

Omg you know what I just LOVE second-person POV, I think it can be so beautiful if it's pulled off well, and it rarely is ;___; BUT YOU DID IT AMAZINGLY. ♥ I love the way you wrote this too, the little change in style you have, especially in the beginning. It seems more raw, somehow.

Donghae wants relationships like racecars want speed, the two things want speed at the same velocity. You love at different velocities-you can’t do this, you can’t say yes to this. - SOBBING, OMG. DDDD:

HENHAE HENHAE HENHAE~~~ ♥ It's like my favourite Henry OTP and there is never any of it around. D:

[mawaru_berry]

I love it, too! Thank you, Sheena! ♥

HenHae is one of my favorite pairings, tbh, but yeah they are almost never written. I've also kind of made it a new personal goal to write more Henry fic, keke~